Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-33032843-20190715162922/@comment-33032843-20190715225024

Rh390110478 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: I felt bad for Denny as he is running away like a fugitive after his reputation is damaged as the Masked Menace. Also, it's amazing when Kung Fu Mario is fighting alongside with the Sushi Pack to defeat the Legion of Low Tide. 1. True!

2. I know, right? Also, I'm considering making a CROSS-ing Over Short starring the Council of Marios in Season 2! What do you think? It'll be great as long as you use the Council members properly. When will you the add revision for Chapter 27 that I made?

This is my change after I watched the video. Any revisions you want to make?

Zoe is seen looking through the lab.

Zoe: So far, all I see are some more experiments Masked Menace is doing.

Toro is seen emerging from an air vent.

Toro: I got you now!

Suddenly, a figure grabs Toro, pulls him back and throws him into a hallway. The figure is revealed to be a version of Mario wearing a straw hat and a jedi robe.

Kung Fu Mario: I saw you trying to attack that girl. I see you need a lesson for that.

Toro: Fine! I’ll kill you too!

Toro lunges at Kung Fu Mario, but he puts both his index and middle fingers on Toro’s temples, causing him to become immobilized.

Toro: The f***?! I can’t move!

Kung Fu Mario: I struck a hidden pressure point called Touya (头亜). Your body will move by my orders.

Toro: What?!

Kung Fu Mario: Jump into the ceiling.

Toro jumped into the ceiling as Kung Fu Mario told him to.

Toro: Ow!

Kung Fu Mario: Bend and spank yourself.

Toro bends over and then starts spanking himself, causing him to wail.

Kung Fu Mario: (sarcastic) You’ve been a bad tuna!

Toro: IT HURTS SO MUCH!

Kung Fu Mario: Bang yourself into the wall.

Toro leaps into the air and bangs his head against the wall, causing him to see the pain.

Toro: OOOWWWWW!!!

Kung Fu Mario: Only a fool seeks meaning from a bowl of oatmeal.

Toro: Are you calling me a fool?!

Kung Fu Mario: No, a bowl of oatmeal. Now, enter this locker for me.

Toro heads to a locker and locks himself in. Kung Fu Mario watches Toro and walks away from the locker where he (Toro) is trapped.

Toro: Hey! Let me out!

Kung Fu Mario: Well, maybe now you learned your lesson about not fighting girls! See you sometime!

Kung Fu Mario enters a portal and it shuts. I'll add it alongside either 32, 33 or 34. I meant this is a change for a scene from chapter 27 where Toro is about to attack Zoe. I know! I meant I'll update Chapter 27 to include the revision. Hey dude, if you're going to use Kung Fu Mario in Chapters 32-33, you can make him turn into a red chinese dragon that can breathe fire. You can also make him use one of the pressure points ([//hokuto.fandom.com/wiki/Keiraku_Hiko https://hokuto.fandom.com/wiki/Keiraku_Hiko]) and use one of the kung fu moves that is based on Hokuto Shinken ([//hokuto.fandom.com/wiki/Hokuto_Shinken https://hokuto.fandom.com/wiki/Hokuto_Shinken]). Keep that in mind, use google translate for each pressure point to see the Chinese pronounciation and replace the "Hokuto" term in each of the Hokuto Shinken techniques used by Kenshiro with "Wing Chun" (咏春) and Shaolin (少林).

Here are the examples:

Hokuto Face Breaking Fist=Shaolin Face Breaking Fist

Hokuto Twin Dragon Wave=Shaolin Twin Dragon Wave

Hokuto Points of Death=Shaolin Yin Yang Points of Death

Hokuto Hundred Rending Fists=Wing Chun Hundred Rending Fists

and the list goes on. Got it! Alright, Hey Rh, remember the Sun Wukong Mario character art that you are doing, Sun Wukong Mario should lower his arm in this reference photo, not raising his arm high like the character art. Just make the staff a little bit smaller. One minor change: the staff should be a little bit thinner. Perfect, it looks amazing! Sorry for my perfectionism, Rh.