Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-30571467-20190508025357/@comment-30571467-20190508031559

Rh390110478 wrote: MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Here's part of what I got for "Zuorsara: A CROSS-ing Over Story!"!

Zuorsara is seen with Ausar the Vile who is sitting on a chair.

Zuorsara: So lord, what should we do now ever since our redemption?

Ausar the Vile: I'd suggest you send me a spirit. I do feel kind of lonely since I live all by myself. You will leave soon anyways.

Zuorsara: I'll try my best ritual!

He then goes to a room and turns on the light.

???: Hello Zuorsara...

Zuorsara: Huh? Who said that--

Suddenly, he gets knocked out by a hammer and the screen cuts to black.

The next scene shows Zuorsara tied up in a dark room.

He wakes up dizzy from being knocked out.

Zuorsara: Ugghh... what happened?

Galath: Hello Zuorsara...

Zuorsara: Wait a minute... GALATH?! I thought you died!

Galath: That may be the case. But I can always come back... and I have some guests for you to meet...

Zuorsara: What guests?

The Bacon Colonel and Bacon General come into the room.

Zuorsara: Wait... YOU TWO?! I thought you died...

Bacon Colonel: We did...

Bacon General: But Galath found out about our dead bodies and he revived us.

Galath: Also, I see you have betrayed me and my deathless army... true disappointment...

Zuorsara: Yeah, and?

Galath: We shall soon plan an attack on the city. And YOU better tell us a way how to get at the city, or we will permanently kill you.

Zuorsara: And how are you going to do that? I am deathless--

Galath: I know how to disable your QIP... now TELL us or else...

Bacon General: You will die...

Zuorsara starts panicking and starts talking. Meanwhile, Jeffygeist is seen looking through a window at all this.

Jeffygeist: This is not good... a new member is in captive by Galath and his army! I better tell someone right now or else--

???: Actually... you won't do anything of the kind...

Jeffygeist: Huh?

He turns around and sees The Wizard Dinosaur, Gnome King and Ryth.

Jeffygeist: WAIT... HOW DID YOU--

The Wizard Dinosaur: Abracadabra!

He then uses his magic wand to lock up Jeffygeist in a cage.

Jeffygeist: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

Gnome King: We even made the bars full stainless steel metal so you can't use your tentacles to break out!

Ryth: And now... you are coming with us...

Jeffygeist: F*** YOU ALL!!! I WILL ESCAPE IF IT IS THE LAST THING I DO!!!

The three take him away in the cage and the screen fades to black. Nice! However, I've already planned for how Bacon Colonel and Bacon General will get revived so maybe that brief mention of their revival can be removed. Ok then! Anyways, what were your favourite scenes? Bacon Colonel and Bacon General's roles!

Also, what do you think of this idea I'm planning for Vandal Buster: Part II?

Basically, when Masked Menace is retreiving villains from the past to help him kill Sunny in exchange of promising them stuff, he also brings back the past yandere version of Saiko! I'm planning that regardless, but here's the REAL idea!

Masked Menace ends up modifying the time machine so that it can be able to travel to different dimensions! He uses it to travel to an alternate timeline of The Last Guest 2 where not only is Jez still loyal to the Bacon Soldiers, but Zara is also a guest-hating bacon soldier! Also, Guest is dead in that timeline and basically, Masked Menace brings the alternate Jez and Zara to the normal timeline to help him in his plans!

What do you think? It is perfect! Looks like Masked Menace might have a hard time redeeming himself... I wonder what will happen to all those past clones by the way. I'm planning for them to become recurring villains in later stories. Ok! Will Masked Menace in the end, turn on everybody after redeeming himself? (The villains)