Thread:CuldeeFell13/@comment-34595515-20190218023508/@comment-34482203-20190218031131

Rh390110478 wrote: CuldeeFell13 wrote:

Rh390110478 wrote: CuldeeFell13 wrote: Your stories were fine so far. Things where I liked it were

1. In Chef Pee Pee's Killing Spree, my character Brooklyn Bot was added and that made me happy!

2. In The Vandal Buster, I was suprised to see Cop 5 working at The Troll Enclosure!

But there were two things that I was like "Huh?" when I read them

1. In Chef Pee Pee's Killing Spree, Junior presses a button on Cody's crotch making him do "the thing"

2. In The Vandal Buster, after everyone escaped, they lost their clothes for some reason.

3. Also we all know about The Rabbit where Sunny was tortured but you apologized so I cant blame you Bad qualtity 1: Well, the real Cody is perverted on occasion and yeah, I kind of felt that was ridiculous.

2. Their clothes were replaced by their prison suits. Cop 5 is a sadist.

3. Yeah. I thought that was the formula for a Looney Tunes themed episode, but yeah. Boko ain’t getting off Scott free after that! Though, I will make the episode canon again, but with the revised ending! Okay then. Well are there any Bad or Good qualities you want to explain of my stories? Sure! Here’s mine!

Good qualities:

1. They are very well written.

2. It was cool to see my avatar character in your stories as well as you creating other avatars of the other story makers and users!

3. My boi, Invertosis!

4. You made my Chef Pee Pee’s Killing Spree story into a fan game which I thought was really cool!

5. Lots of unique villains! My favorite so far is Miles the Genie!

6. Great artwork!

Bad qualities:

The only bad quality: Cop 5 didn’t get punished in the original ending for Toad’s Revenge, though you have said it’s non canon in favor of my alternate ending where he does get punished. But it was still an awesome story!

Well, those were my good and bad qualities! Okay then. Thx