Thread:MarioFan2009/@comment-34595515-20190718200121/@comment-30571467-20190719021511

Rh390110478 wrote: MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: At the Krusty Krab, Bubble Bass is seen ordering his food.

Bubble Bass: I'd like to order three krabby combos, extra bacon on the side, two chilli cheese fries, a basket of krusty dogs and coral bits, a catch of the day and a kelp shake.

Squidward: (to Spongebob) Three oinkers wearing pants, plate of hot air, basket of Grandma's breakfast and change the bull to a gill.

Spongebob: Got it!

Spongebob cooks the food very quickly and puts it on a tray. Squidward hands the tray to Bubble Bass.

Squidward: That will be $26.97.

Bubble Bass hands Squidward the money, but Mr. Krabs bursts out of the floor and takes the money.

Mr. Krabs: Me cash register, me money!

Mr. Krabs goes back into the floor. Bubble Bass takes his tray, heads to a table and eats his food.

A few hours later.

It is nightime. Spongebob and Squidward are seen leaving the Krusty Krab.

Mr. Krabs: Come back tomorrow, boys! We have more money to make!

Spongebob: Can do, Mr. Krabs!

Spongebob and Squidward leave.

Squidward: (to himself) I hate this job.

A few minutes later.

Spongebob is seen entering his house.

Spongebob: Hey, Gary! Just got back from the Krusty Krab!

Gary: "meow" (Cool!)

Spongebob: Well, I'm going to bed. Tomorrow is meatloaf monday at the Krusty Krab! Night, Gary!

Gary: "meow" (Night!)

Spongebob heads upstairs. He gets into his bed and falls asleep.

A few hours later.

Spongebob suddenly wakes up when he hears loud banging noises from outside the room.

Spongebob: What was that?

Spongebob notices a rip in his wallpaper.

Spongebob: What happened to my wallpaper?

Spongebob opens a door which falls over.

Spongebob: Hm. I thought I got that door screwed in.

Spongebob enters his library and is shocked to see it is wrecked.

Spongebob: My library! (gasps) My prized memorial of Stephen Hillenburg! Someone has no respect for him! (gasps) My clothes!

Spongebob picks up a pair of torn pants.

Spongebob: Who? Who could have done this?

Spongebob hears somebody laughing downstairs.

Spongebob: S***! It's a home invasion!

Spongebob opens a safe, takes out bubbles and heads downstairs.

Spongebob: Stay back! I got bubbles!

Spongebob enters the living room and spots Gary on top of the TV.

Spongebob: Gary! What did you see?

Gary: "meow" (I don't know! Some guy just broke in and trashed the place!)

Spongebob: Man! I hope it wasn't Manny! He is annoyed about his show only getting one season.

Spongebob calls Manny on his phone.

Spongebob: Manny! Where are you?

Manny: (voice) At my house trying to get some sleep! Why?

Spongebob hangs up.

Manny: (voice) Hello? Hello?

Spongebob: Manny is at his house so it's not him! But who is it?!

The laughing is heard again.

Spongebob: I think it came from the basement!

Spongebob runs into the basement and heads downstairs. At the bottom, he finds the entire basement has been wrecked with books and other materials all over the floor.

Spongebob: My basement! Who's in here?! I got bubbles! They hurt the eyes real bad!

Spongebob notices two messages on the wall, written in blood. The first message reads "Yay, me!" and the second reads "You will pay for ruining me, sponge!".

Spongebob: The heck? Who wrote this-

Suddenly, Spongebob is hit in the head with a baseball bat and is knocked out. Behind him is a shadowy figure with yellow eyes.

???: Got you now, sponge!

The figure grabs Spongebob by the legs and drags him away..

Who kidnapped Spongebob? A CROSS-ing Over Short!

Coming in late-July! AWESOME!

My favourite scenes have to be with Bubble Bass, Squidward, Mr. Krabs and Manny! I also like how Spongebob mentioned a prized memorial for Stephen Hillenburg!

Quick thing: When you publish the story, make sure "Kidnapped" is capitalized in the title.

Also, since Detective Pikachu is appearing, can AsphaltianOof have a role by any means of a chance? 1. Nice!

2. Ok! At first, I thought Kidnapped being lowercase was correct, but I can do that!

3. He can! 1. (Insert you know what)

2. Actually, words such as "Over", "With", "At", "But", and a few more are ones that shouldn't be capitalized. However, since "CROSS-ing Over!" has “over” in it, I will let it pass. BUT, other story arrangements such as "CROSS-ing over Shorts!" and "CROSS-ing over Stories", I will lowercase "Over" in those titles only.

3. AsphaltianOof: And hopefully I'm not the person behind the case this time...

Detective Pikachu: ... 2. Ok! I did like the name as CROSS-ing Over better, but I'm okay with this!

3. You won't. Do you even look similar to the shadowy person in this teaser?

2. Well, while my boy Duos in a Buck was editing on the Looney Tunes Wiki, he noticed that not one, but THREE titles in particular were not capitalized. This can be proven over here:

https://looneytunes.fandom.com/wiki/My_Bunny_Lies_over_the_Sea

https://looneytunes.fandom.com/wiki/Wild_over_You

https://looneytunes.fandom.com/wiki/Scent-imental_over_You

3. AsphaltianOof: Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

2000 Years Later...

AsphaltianOof: Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no?