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Rh390110478 wrote: MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: _________________________

Alternate Inktropolis

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Human Meggy is seen heading to a large podium in the center of the city. Several inklings that she passes glare at her with angry and disgusted looks.

Inkling 1: It’s Meggy. What is she doing here?

Inkling 2: That’s Meggy.

Inkling 3: Look at her. I can’t believe she’s here. That Meggy?

Human Meggy heads to the top of the podium and heads to a purple colored inkling who is wearing a red and gold outfit with a crown.

Human Meggy: Hey, Rainbow Inkling.

Alternate Rainbow Inkling: Hello, Meggy.

Human Meggy: Anyways, why did you invite me here?

Alternate Rainbow Inkling turns from purple to red.

Alternate Rainbow Inkling: (mad) You know what this is about.

An inkling guard takes out a remote and pushes the button. A large TV screen begins playing footage, but it isn’t shown. All of the inklings shout in disgust.

Inkling 4: I never trusted her (Human Meggy). It’s the outlaw. The “CENSORED”.

Inkling 5: What’s she doing here? She doesn’t belong here. First, she becomes human and then she does the unforgivable.

Alternate Rainbow Inkling: (To the Inklings) Silence! (To Human Meggy) When we found out what you did in the Mushroom Kingdom, acts like that will not be allowed in our city.

Human Meggy: I know, but it was an accident! Honest!

Alternate Rainbow Inkling: Accident or not, you let your obsession to win take control of you. As a result for your action, you have left us no choice.

Human Meggy: N-No! Y-you don’t mean it!

Inklings: Give her what she deserves!

Alternate Rainbow Inkling: Exile!

Human Meggy: No! It was an accident!

Inklings: Exile her! Exile! Exile!

Alternate Rainbow Inkling: (pointing at the exit pipe in the back of the city) I want you to leave, Meggy. And this time, don’t come back.

Human Meggy: But-

Alternate Rainbow Inkling: Go.

Human Meggy sadly heads back to the bottom. Several inklings begin playing the drums. (At this point, the dialogue is lyrics for a song.)

Inkling 1: Deception!

Inkling 2: Disgrace!

Inklings: Evil as clear as the human she is!

Several inklings on rooftops throw paintballs at Human Meggy as the inklings chase her out of the city.

Inkling 3: Deception!

Inkling 4: An outrage!

Inkling 5: Disgrace!

Inkling 6: For shame!

Inklings: She (Human Meggy) asked for trouble the moment she came!

Inkling 7: Deception!

Inkling 8: An outrage!

Inkling 9: You disgust us!

Inkling 10: Disgrace!

Inkling 11: For shame!

Inkling 12: Get out of here!

Inklings: Evil as clear as the human she is!

Inkling 13: See you never!

Human Meggy runs past several inklings who load paint into their ink guns and fire at her.

Inkling 14: Deception!

Inkling 15: An outrage!

Inkling 16: Don’t come back!

Inkling 17: Disgrace!

Inkling 18: For shame!

Inkling 19: Traitor, go back to your own!

Inklings: She (Human Meggy) asked for trouble the moment she came!

Inkling 20: So long, traitor!

Inklings: Born in grief. Raised in hate. Helpless to defy her fate. Let her run. Let her live. But do not forget what we cannot forgive. And she (Human Meggy) is not one of us. She has never been one of us. She is not part of us. Not our kind.

Human Meggy is chased out of Inktropolis by the inklings and ends up at the beach area. She looks at her reflection in the ocean and it turns into a reflection of a laughing Francis much to Human Meggy’s shock as she continues heading towards the pipe.

Inklings: Someone (Francis) once lied to us. Now, we are not so blind. For we knew he would do what he’s done. And we know that she’ll (Human Meggy) never be one of us.

Inkling 21: Deception!

Inkling 22: Disgrace!

Inkling 23: Deception!

Inkling 24: Disgrace!

Inkling 25: Deception!

Human Meggy reaches the pipe. She turns around and sees all of the inklings still glaring at her. Human Meggy sadly enters the pipe.

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A New World Order

September 2019

_________________________ Ugh! This was rather annoying than sad!

TBH, I have no favourite scenes whatsoever. These Inklings were such jerks.. I know. What Human Meggy did will be revealed soon.

Also, should I scrap this since you didn't like it? 1. Ok.

2. Uh, no. Just decrease some of the dialogue from the Inklings. That was the only thing I disliked. Actually, here's my new plan! I can just change it so that Human Meggy isn't exiled, but the inklings are instead afraid of her. Not in the hateful way. Ok! I think that is a better option!