Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-30571467-20190512231025/@comment-30571467-20190512232948

Rh390110478 wrote: MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Since my ending for "An End Awaits" is controversial by Culdee, I was wondering if you could help me find a better punishment for the villains? Do you have any suggestions to help me on the ending? I wouldn't want this to be a rehash of The Rabbit!'s original ending except it's on me and in a chapter story. I think a better punishment would be for them to get trapped in the shadow realm where they would meet a new character and even though you said they would be gone forever, it could give potential for them to at least reappear! Ok! But what should the new character's name be? I think Darthon! Alright! Maybe Darthon can keep them company for a while after Craig sends them into the void! He will take them to the shadow realm where they will be taken care of in good hands! I don't know if the character is a villain or not though... Well, they way they could potentially return is when Darthon unlocks an escape route! Alright! If I get a plan, it might be that he could send them to a planet (possibly in real life or fiction) where they can live in for the rest of their days! They might come back in your story for another attack or a bigger plan than "The End"!