Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-30571467-20190604025049/@comment-34595515-20190604030717

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: It starts off with a huge throne of robots. Dave is seen monitoring the place. Dan is aside with him.

Dave: So Dan, who was this "traitor", you were talking about?

Dan: Her name is PLA-1137. She goes by the name Paula Fox now. I must have my vengeance on her.

Dave: Ok.

He then looks through a camera and sees Paula Fox, Katy Kat, Sunny, Zulzo and Azaz heading down a hall.

Dave: Dan.

Dan: Yes Dave?

Dave: You may go to room 6666. I see Paula Fox. I have a plan.

Dan: Cool! I'll go there right now.

Dan then runs off.

Dave: Heh heh heh... this is gonna be perfect.

He then sends off a loud intercom noise. A distorted voice is also heard that keeps saying "Room 6666".

Azaz: GAH!! What is that awful noise?!

Katy Kat: Doesn't sound anything good at all!

Sunny: Agreed...

Demonic Announcer: ROOM 6666. ROOM 6666.

Zulzo: Room 6666?

Azaz: What's that?

Sunny: I don't even know!

Paula Fox: It's about time I finally check something out for myself.

Katy Kat: PAULA! Wait!!

Paula Fox: What is it?

Azaz: You might die!

Sunny: Yeah! Do you really want to take a risk?

Paula Fox: Yes. I need to find out about this.

Zulzo: (Sigh) Fine... but be careful...

Paula Fox: I will.

She then leaves in a rush.

Meanwhile.

Paula Fox kicks down a door to a dark vile room. It is all black and grey and has no actual features.

Paula Fox: This place looks like it was owned by the most treacherous beings ever! God...

She then sees some stairs.

Paula Fox: Hmmm...

She walks up the stairs.

It then leads to a yellowish, black and some orange tower on top of the building.

Paula Fox: Though I hate the villains, I must say that this tower is amazingly made!

She then sees a grey robot with red eyes and a evil smile.

Paula Fox: Wait... you look familiar to me...

Dan: (Laughs) Isn't it obvious? Paula...

Immediately, she remembers the robot's voice and intentions.

Paula Fox: WAIT A MINUTE...

She then takes a slight run-like approach.

Paula Fox: I saw you die...

Dan: And I for the fact saw you become a betrayer. So. You are one of us are you? PLA-1137...

Paula Fox: I no matter what you will do, will end you and Dave's reign of terror. And with all the power Crash has forged we will end your "Robotic" life.

Dan: You think to betray us, and harvest Crash's power for yourself?

It then takes a cut closer on Dan's smiling face. It then turns to a furious expression...

Dan: Then you are more of a fool than I imagined...

He then gets up furious and stands in place with bawled fists.

Dan: You will NOT serve the heroes power, traitor, no matter how much you have actually redeemed yourself...

Suddenly, Dan takes a big jump and lands near Paula Fox's front on his arm and feet without taking any physical damage.

Dan: For I.. am Dan. First robot of I.M Meen, high part of the election rig, and SHIELD, of Dave's great plan... (His left hand then turns into a shield and his right one turns into a sword) I will destroy your body... HUNT down your animal reproduction... AND IMPRISON YOUR SOUL FOR ALL TIME!!!!!

The screen quickly cuts to black. Zara: Well, f***! What were your favourite scenes? Dan bragging about himself! Yeah. We can just say this: Ever since Paula nearly killed Dan in Chapter 19 of The Election! and turning him into a completely horrifying grey robot with red eyes, he wants to return the favour to Paula by taking her life out of this world... Oh dear.

Also, here's an addition suggestion for the scene-

Cat in the Hat: Addition rhymes with Suggestion! EGGS!

Anyways..

Paula: But I saw you fall into the lava! I saw you burn!

Dan: Indeed, I did! Now, I have lost my human disguise and have become.. THIS METAL ABOMINATION! DO YOU HAVE ANY F****** IDEA WHAT YOU'VE CAUSED ME TO BECOME?!?!

So, what do you think?