Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-30571467-20190504200813/@comment-30571467-20190504202038

Rh390110478 wrote: MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: 1. I see you changed your profile! Nice! Can't for the next change!

2. Are my teasers for future stories giving you such suspense and chills?

3. What is the plot for "The Journey Home!" again? I think I might have some ideas for the story! 1. Nice!

2. Yes!

3. I think the plot will have something to do with Boko and Mouse. Basically, both of them accidentally get left behind somewhere and they have to make their way back to the city!

Anyways, you can give me ideas! Ok, here's an idea! Since Beaky Buzzard hasn't really appeared in your stories yet, I think you should give him a protagonist role where he helps the rodents. Here is how it goes: Mouse and Boko get left off somewhere in an unknown forest. They then come across Beaky Buzzard who is desperate to find food around the place. Soon, instead of eating them, Boko and Mouse convenience Beaky to help them for a even better reward. However, little do the three know the dangers that might happen to them!

What do you think? Also, here's another question:

What teaser for my story has so far given you the most suspense and chills? You can choose three if you'd like! 1. Cool! He can have a role! Although, I'm planning for it to occur in another location. Most likely a farm.

2. The one where Crystal presumambly dies because who knows how Sunny could react! Probably terrified...