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DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: Continuation of Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M vs. Dastardly Three: Kung Fu Mario vs. Murder Man and his gang!

At Murder Man's hideout, Murder Man and his villains start discussing about their plans.

Murder Man: Alright gang, I have a plan today.

Spiderman: What is it, Murder Man?

[Insert Murder Man's and his villains' lines about robbing a bank]

Mega Maid: Cool!

Meanwhile, Sunny is spying on Murder Man and his gang by peeking through the window.

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert what Sunny is about to do] Unknown to Sunny, Kung Fu Mario, who is in his plumber uniform but with Sun Wukong's boots, is also spying on the villains by peeking through a hole.

Kung Fu Mario: These bastards think they'll rob a bank? However, they know nothing about Shaolin Kung Fu and its 1560 year history...

At a city bank, Murder Man and his villains are seen holding bags filled with money.

[Insert Murder Man's and his villains' lines]

Sunny, who is in her Iron Flower armor, arrives at the bank where Murder Man and his gang stole as Parappa, Frida, Paula, and PJ Beeri came right after her.

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Murder Man's line]

Suddenly, Mr. M appears right in front of Sunny.

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert PJ Beeri's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: I see you pure evil villains are trying to rob a bank. Allow me to show you trash what I'm about to do!

Murder Man and the others analyze Mr. M's appearance.

[Insert Murder Man's and his villains' line]

End of Part 1 Murder Man: Today, we will be robbing the bank and spending the money to acquire Sonic Drive-In and shut them down so they won't sell anymore chill dogs!

Spider Man: Nice! What for?

Mega Maid: It's to get back at Sonic the Hedgehog for running into us and making us drop our bank loot into the lake.

Ink Brute: We would've gotten away with it if it weren't for his triple spin!

Murder Man X: Anyways, we'll be robbing the bank soon.

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Sunny: They're planning another robbery. I'll have to bring my friends to stop him.

Sunny leaves.

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Murder Man: Ok! We got the money!

Ink Brute: Now, we need to shut down Sonic Drive-In.

Mega Maid: Without chilli dogs, Sonic shall suffer!

Spider Man: Yeah! Just like when I taught J. Jonah Jameson a "lesson"..

Murder Man X: We should be there soon.

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Sunny: There they are!

Murder Man: S***! It's the Iron Flower!

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Sunny: The f***?

Parappa: Who is that?

Frida: Why does he look like Mario?

Paula: Especially since he looks like a Dragon Ball ripoff. (RH: Don't take this seriously.)

PJ Berri: I haven't heard of it.

Parappa: Me neither.

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Murder Man: Apparently, his name is Sun Wukong Mario?

Mega Maid: What kind of name is that?

Spider Man: I know, right?

Ink Brute: Like when I faced some inkling named "The Toxic Inkling". He wasn't very toxic at all.

Murder Man X: True.

​​​​​​ Part 2:

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: I don't know why are you villains think that I'm Great Sage the Equal to Heaven (Sun Wukong Mario). Allow me to introduce to myself. I am the protector of the innocents, conqueror of evil, and defender of justice! The Red Fire! MR. M!!!!!

Mr. M does a pose similar to one of the Ginyu Force Members.

Spiderman: Mr. M?

Sunny suddenly has a flashback of The Dastardly Three killed by Mr. M.

[Insert Sunny's line]

Kung Fu Mario: Oh yeah, the pure evil bandits that I killed in front of you and your friends. I'll kill those merciless bastards for robbing banks and harming innocent people!

Part 2:

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: I don't know why are you villains think that I'm Great Sage the Equal to Heaven (Sun Wukong Mario). Allow me to introduce to myself. I am the protector of the innocents, conqueror of evil, and defender of justice! The Red Fire! MR. M!!!!!

Mr. M does a pose similar to one of the Ginyu Force Members.

Spiderman: Mr. M?

Sunny suddenly has a flashback of The Dastardly Three killed by Mr. M.

[Insert Sunny's line]

Kung Fu Mario: Oh yeah, the pure evil bandits that I killed in front of you and your friends. I'll kill those merciless bastards for robbing banks and harming innocent people!

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert PJ Beeri's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Now, which one of you villains shall fight me first?

Ink Brute: I will, you weakling!

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

'''Then, Denny shows up late. (Note: Denny's name is already cleared)'''

Denny: Sorry that I'm late, you guys. What did I miss anyway?

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert Ink Brute's line to Mr. M]

[Insert Ink Brute's action.]

End of Part 2 Sunny: He's the one who killed The Dastardly Three!

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Sunny: Usually, we just send them to prison.

Paula: True!

Parappa: Not slaughter them.

PJ Berri: Except for robots.

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Frida: I don't know about him. I heard he broke Meggy's legs once!

Parappa: True! Sunny said her legs snapped like a twig!

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'Sunny: Nothing. We're just watching this person about to kill more robbers.

Denny: Um, ok?

Ink Brute: (to Mr. M) Prepare for your end!

Ink Brute punches Mr. M, but nothing happens. Part 3:

Ink Brute punches Mr. M, but nothing happens.

Ink Brute: What the?!

Ink Brute punhes Mr. M two times, but nothing happens stil and only gave Mr. M some bleeding in the mouth.

[Insert Murder Man's line]

[Insert Mrga Maid's line]

[Insert Murder Man X's line]

Ink Brute: Why you?!

Ink Brute tries to deliver Mr. M punches, but Mr. M keeps dodging Ink Brute's fists.

Ink Brute: Why do my punches always miss?!

Ink Brute continues to punch Mr. M, but still missed a single hit.

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert PJ Beeri's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

Ink Brute: STOP DODGING, WILL YOU?!?!

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: I will.

Ink Brute starts punching Mr. M, only for him blocking Ink Brute's fists with a single finger.

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert Mega Maid's line]

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert Murder Man's line]

[Insert Murder Man X's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Is that all you got, Ink Ape?

[Insert Ink Brute' line]

Mr. M unleashes fiery aura and starts giving Ink Brute a flurry of punches all over him.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Atatatatatatatatatata! Wota!

'''Mr. M punches Ink Brute in the face as if somebody pushed him away. Ink Brute falls to the ground after Mr. M delivers him a final blow.'''

Kung Fu Mario (narrating): Wing Chun Rending Fists (咏春白裂拳, In Chinese: Yong Chun Bai Lie Quan, In Japanese: Eishun Hyakuretsu Ken)!

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

Ink Brute gets back up after Mr. M punched him rapidly.

Ink Brute: Your fists are as ticklish like a mosquito! I'm gonna end you!!!!!

[Insert Paula's line]

Insert PJ Beeri's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: You're already dead.

[Insert Ink Brute's last words]

'''Ink Brute's body starts to expand and deform, while his other side of his head starts to inflate. Ink Brute explodes with a fiery explosion after his body is getting inflated and deformed.'''

[Insert Sunny's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert Parappa's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert Paula's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert PJ Beeri's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert Denny's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert Frida's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert the villains' lines]

After Ink Brute explodes with a fiery explosion, Mr. M glares at the villains.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Who's next?

[Insert Spiderman's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Well well well, if that isn't "Peter Parker"?

[Insert Spiderman's line]

End of Part 3

Also, any updates on Rh Superheroes, teaser art, and the COM Chapter 3 script? Murder Man: How is he not getting knocked out?!

Mega Maid: He is bleeding, but besides that, it's nothing!

Murder Man X: Is he a god or something?!

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Sunny: Well, Ink Brute sure isn't doing well!

Paula: True! I thought he was a Russian champion!

Parappa: Agreed!

PJ Berri: "eating donuts" Now, this is MY kind of entertainment!

Denny: Yeah!

_________________________

Paula: The heck?!

Denny: How is that possible?

Parappa: One finger?

Mega Maid: That can't be possible!

Spider Man: Yet before I turned to evil, I stopped a train with my bare body!

Murder Man: (to Spider Man) You used to be good?

Murder Man X: Just like Firestar and Ice Man before they turned on us!

_________________________

Ink Brute: WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME?!?!?!?!?!?!

_________________________

Denny: What the f*** is he saying?!?!

Parappa: I don't know! I don't understand chinese OR japanese!

Sunny: True! Our planet, Greenhouse didn't have that kind of language!

Paula: What else what it like? Did you have your own language?

_________________________

Paula: Did he just put a spell on Ink Brute?

PJ Berri: I don't know.

_________________________

Sunny: OH S***!

Parappa: OH GOD! SOME OF HIS INK GOT IN MY MOUTH!

Paula: S***! IT'S ALL OVER MY JACKET! DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO GET STAINS OUT OF IT?!?!

PJ Berri: NO! MY DONUTS ARE WASTED, MAN!

Denny: Seriously?! That's what you're (PJ Berri) concerned about?!

Frida; Ah, s***!

Murder Man: Dang it! Now, our gang is down to four!

Mega Maid: I know!

Murder Man X: True!

Spider Man: I can't stand him (Sun Wukong Mario) anymore!

_________________________

Spider Man: That's it! I'm out of here-

_________________________

Spider Man: How did you know my real name?!? ​​​​​​ Late, because I need a break from it.

Part 4:

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: A friend of mine told me and I read comics about you. (Note: Kung Fu Mario did not reveal his identity.)

'''A flashback of a Teenage Kung Fu Mario packing his school supplies. Soon, a goomba approaches him.'''

Goomba: Hey, Mario!

Kung Fu Mario: Hey Henry, how's it going?

Henry: Can I ask you something, Mario?

Kung Fu Mario: Sure.

Henry: Are you a fan of Marvel?

Kung Fu Mario: No, not really, but I heard them. I might theeir comics sometime so I'll be interested in it.

Henry: Do you know Spiderman?

Kung Fu Mario: Yeah, I heard about him. He has spider abilities and shooting webs from his arms.

Henry: So... Did you know his real name is Peter Parker?

Kung Fu Mario: Huh, didn't know that.

Henry: Well, if you didn't know about it, you should read his comics.

Kung Fu Mario: Okay, I'll try to read them.

Henry: Just to let you know, he's also gay.

Kung Fu Mario: Really?

'''Kung Fu Mario is seen on his bed reading Spiderman comics on his phone. Flasback ends.'''

Kung Fu Mario: And that's how knew about your identity, Peter. True story.

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert the villains' lines]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Oh and speaking of Sun Wukong Mario, you and your villains kerp calling me his name, right? He's actually over there.

Spiderman: What?

Mr. M points at Sun Wukong Mario, who is blindfolded so he can't attack Sunny and Denny.

Sun Wukong Mario: Hey Mr. M! *In his thoughts* I knew who you actually are, Kung Fu Mario.

[Insert Spiderman's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: What's the matter, Peter? Why are you acting like a coward all of a sudden? Why don't you use your web slingers at me and detect me with your spider sense as we're fighting, I don't really care.

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert the villains' line]

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert Spiderman's action]

End of Part 4 Spider Man: Ok?

PJ Berri: Cool!

Sunny: Haven't realy read those.

Frida: Me too.

Denny: Same.

Parappa: I did!

Paula: Cool!

Murder Man: Ew! Spider Man was a hero?!

Mega Maid: That's disgusting!

Murder Man X: I never knew Sun Wukong Mario read Spider Man's comics

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Spider Man: Please, man! Don't hurt me!

Sunny: I don't have a good feeling about this.

Parappa: Me neither.

Paula: True.

PJ Berri: "eating popcorn" This will be entertaining!

Denny: (to PJ Berri) Are you going to share those?

Frida: (to Denny) Um, don't you only eat dirt?

Denny: Right! I forgot.

Murder Man: Spider Man. This is your last chance to redeem yourself.

Mega Maid: If you fail, you will never rise from the ashes of your shame and humiliation!

Murder Man X: Do not fail us.

Spider Man: I'll try to beat him.

Spider Man shoots web at Kung Fu Mario. Sorry that I'm late, Rh, since I need a break from it for a while.

Part 5:

Spiderman shoots webs at Mr. M and lands on his face.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M (in his thoughts): Spider silk!

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert the villains' lines]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Sunny's line]

'''Spiderman starts wrapping Mr. M into a cocoon as he is struggling to remove the web from his face. Once Spiderman is done, Mr. M is nothing but a large white sac.'''

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Denny's lime]

[Insert PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert the villains' lines]

The white cocoon containing Mr. M starts to rumble.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M (muffled): Hrrrrrrrgh...

[Insert the villains' lines]

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

Mr. M breaks free from the cocoon made by Spiderman and unleashes a fiery aura around him.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: HAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGH!!!!!!!

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Spiderman's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Shaolin Kung Fu has a 1560 year history! Scums like you are unable to defeat me!

[Insert Spiderman's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Say, you have spider sense, right? Will it work on one of my master's techniques?

[Insert Spiderman's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Then allow show you, Shaolin Kung Fu Secret Technique: Yin Yang Point Spirit (阴阳点心, in Chinese: Yin Yang Dian Xin, in Japanese: Onmyo Tenshin)!

When Mr. M starts moving, he creates a trail of afterimages as he's surrounding Spiderman.

[Insert Spiderman's line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

[Insert the villains' line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

[Insert Denny's line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

[Insert PJ Berri's line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

[Insert Parappa's line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

Sunny activates her boosters and sees Mr. M move in a pattern of a Yin Yang as he's using Yin Yang Point Spirit.

[Insert Sunny's line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert Spiderman's line]

As Mr. M and his afterimages hit Spiderman in his blind spots, [Insert what happened to Spiderman].

[Insert Spiderman's line]

End of Part 5

Hey Rh, which part in the teaser art and the chapter 3 script are you on now? Also, when will you change the scene of Kung Fu Mario fighting Toro in chapter 27? Here's the revised scene of it:

Any revisions you want to make?

Zoe is seen looking through the lab.

Zoe: So far, all I see are some more experiments Masked Menace is doing.

Toro is seen emerging from an air vent.

Toro: I got you now!

Suddenly, a figure grabs Toro, pulls him back and throws him into a hallway. The figure is revealed to be a version of Mario wearing a straw hat and a jedi robe.

Kung Fu Mario: I saw you trying to attack that girl. I see you need a lesson for that.

Toro: Fine! I’ll kill you too!

Toro lunges at Kung Fu Mario, but he puts both his index and middle fingers on Toro’s temples, causing him to become immobilized.

Toro: The f***?! I can’t move!

Kung Fu Mario: I struck a hidden pressure point called Touya (头亜). Your body will move by my orders.

Toro: What?!

Kung Fu Mario: Jump into the ceiling.

Toro jumped into the ceiling as Kung Fu Mario told him to.

Toro: Ow!

Kung Fu Mario: Bend and spank yourself.

Toro bends over and then starts spanking himself, causing him to wail.

Kung Fu Mario: (sarcastic) You’ve been a bad tuna!

Toro: IT HURTS SO MUCH!

Kung Fu Mario: Bang yourself into the wall.

Toro leaps into the air and bangs his head against the wall, causing him to see the pain.

Toro: OOOWWWWW!!!

Kung Fu Mario: Only a fool seeks meaning from a bowl of oatmeal.

Toro: Are you calling me a fool?!

Kung Fu Mario: No, a bowl of oatmeal. Now, enter this locker for me.

Toro heads to a locker and locks himself in. Kung Fu Mario walks away from the locker where Toro is trapped.

Toro: Hey! Let me out!

Kung Fu Mario: Well, maybe now you learned your lesson about not fighting girls! See you sometime!

Kung Fu Mario enters a portal and it shuts. I'll get to them later. I'm currently talking to MF2009 on Discord.

In the meantime, check out this cool thing I made!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pw45R6GX82s I'll try watch it soon. What about the COM Chapter 3 script, the teaser art, and the revised scene of Chapter 27? Which part in the teaser art are you on now?