Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-30571467-20190703021432/@comment-34595515-20190703052029

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Since you haven't made Chapter 27 yet and Terrovax is yet to debut, can I give you a draft of Jez and Zara's encounter with Terrovax? Sure! Sorry for being so late but, I was stopping Village Raids in Minecraft. I'll work on the script right now! Ok! Here it is! I also added "insert line" for some dialogue so you can also help me out a little bit!

It shows Jez and Zara after seeing "The FRI-1137 Incident". Jez is seen stunned and Zara is shocked.

[Insert Jez's line]

[Insert Zara's line]

[Insert Jez's line]

[Insert Zara's line]

Unnoticed by the two, metal foot steps are heard from behind. A large man holding a large blade and large shield, wearing armor, a animal-type mask and large metal boots is seen approaching them. Jez and Zara turn around to see the man.

???: Looking for something?

Jez: Huh?

Zara: Who are you?

???: You shouldn't be here.

Jez: What IS this place?

???: That information is classified. You are not supposed to be here. Name's Terrovax.

Terrovax sees the files of "The FRI-1137 Incident" open.

Terrovax: Ah. I see you are poking around where you don't belong.

Zara: Why are you taunting us?

Terrovax: That doesn't matter. This secret should NEVER be revealed to anyone. “Sigh” Now that you've seen this, I can't let you leave...

Zara: We'll see about that.

She puts on her Shadowhawk outfit. Jez pulls out his gun and shoots Terrovax right in the face causing him to let out a grunt.

Terrovax: F***!!!

[Insert Jez's line]

[Insert Zara's line]

Terrovax: Ohhh. Now you've done it. I would have easily kidnapped you. BUT YOU'VE ANNOYED ME ALREADY.

In a fury, Terrovax bashes his shield and blade together as he engages battle with Jez and Zara.

Zara: I'll deal with him! Go along Jez!

Jez: Ok!

Jez runs off.

[Insert Terrovax's line]

Terrovax uses his sword to stab Zara in the chest, however, the sword bounces off and hits Terrovax in the face.

[Insert Terrovax's line]

Zara: How are you not dead?!

[Insert Terrovax's line]

Terrovax tries to bash his shield into Zara and attempts to kick her. Zara manages to dodge his every attempt.

[Insert Terrovax's line]

Zara kicks Terrovax in the chest causing him to pant in pain.

Terrovax: You stupid... stupid... STUPID WOMAN!!!

[Insert Zara's line]

She bashes him against a wall before running off quickly.

[Insert Zara's line]

[Insert Terrovax's line]

Suddenly, shadows are seen coming out of the distance.

???: What's going on here?!

[Insert Terrovax's line] Perfect! I'll use this! Thanks! Also, what about the extra lines? I'll include them in the script! Alright! But can you show them to me? I'd like to see what you've got! Ok!

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Jez: I-I can't believe this!

Zara: Frida was a robot?!

Jez: Apparently! It's right there in the footage!

Zara: Man! How will the others react?

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Jez: Stay back!

Zara: Foul beast!

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Terrovax: You've driven my patience enough! Now, I am going to destroy you!

Terrovax: S***!

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Terrovax: I am a Deathless. I CAN'T DIE!

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Terrovax: HOLD STILL!

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Zara: I'm out of here!

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Zara: So long, sucker!

Terrovax: COME BACK HERE AND FIGHT!

Terrovax: Boss?!? ​​​​​​ ​​​​​​