Thread:CuldeeFell13/@comment-34595515-20190606020649/@comment-34482203-20190606022042

CuldeeFell13 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: CuldeeFell13 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: CuldeeFell13 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: Inside a burning skyscraper, Jez, Zara, Petra and Olivia are seen hiding behind a pile of rubble.

Olivia: I can't believe this whole thing is happening to the cities!

Petra: I know! It's like the Wither Storm, but much worse!

Zara: Well, we need to get out of the building before it collapses!

Jez: Right!

A person is seen running by, but gets shot in the leg by an ISIS soldier.

Jez: S***!

Dark Tari enters and grabs the person by the neck.

Dark Tari: Hello, there.

Petra: Wait. Is that Tari?

Olivia: Looks like her, but what's with her eyes?

Dark Tari: Anyways, my boss, Masked Menace wants me to ask you where Sunny is.

Person: I-I DON'T KNOW SOMEONE NAMED SUNNY!

Dark Tari: Wrong answer.

Dark Tari blasts the person in the leg.

Person: SON OF A B****!

Dark Tari: (on comlink) Boss. This guy I have isn't cooperating.

Masked Menace: (voice) Then, get rid of him.

Dark Tari: On it.

Dark Tari activates her knife arm and slits the person's throat.

Zara: OH GOD!

Olivia: WHAT THE F***?!?

The person crawls away, but Dark Tari heads up to him.

Dark Tari: You should have told us sooner.

Dark Tari raises her foot and stomps on the guy's head, crushing it and killing him.

Jez: OH F***!

Petra: I.. I can't even believe what I saw!

Olivia: Me too!

Dark Tari: Well, time to continue looking.

Dark Tari activates her boosters and flies off through a window. Jackie Chu: HORY S***!

I hope Dark Tari gets a HUGE punishment for her deeds!

Anyways, excited!

Person's Ghost: EXCUSE ME!? I F***ING DIED!

(Person's Ghost beats up Culdee) True!

Also, what were your favorite parts? Dark Tari going to far...

Also since the plan for Dr. Morpheous is scrapped, I have a plan. What if there was a boss of Dr. Morpheous and he/she was the real villain. But thats-

Matpat: ...

Just an idea!

Matpat: OH OKAY!

(Matpat flies away) Sounds good! Thanks! What i'm thinking is that you can keep your twist but instead of Morpheous being the villain, his boss is!