Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-30571467-20190703021432/@comment-30571467-20190703050052

Rh390110478 wrote: MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Since you haven't made Chapter 27 yet and Terrovax is yet to debut, can I give you a draft of Jez and Zara's encounter with Terrovax? Sure! Sorry for being so late but, I was stopping Village Raids in Minecraft. I'll work on the script right now! Ok! Here it is! I also added "insert line" for some dialogue so you can also help me out a little bit!

It shows Jez and Zara after seeing "The FRI-1137 Incident". Jez is seen stunned and Zara is shocked.

[Insert Jez's line]

[Insert Zara's line]

[Insert Jez's line]

[Insert Zara's line]

Unnoticed by the two, metal foot steps are heard from behind. A large man holding a large blade and large shield, wearing armor, a animal-type mask and large metal boots is seen approaching them. Jez and Zara turn around to see the man.

???: Looking for something?

Jez: Huh?

Zara: Who are you?

???: You shouldn't be here.

Jez: What IS this place?

???: That information is classified. You are not supposed to be here. Name's Terrovax.

Terrovax sees the files of "The FRI-1137 Incident" open.

Terrovax: Ah. I see you are poking around where you don't belong.

Zara: Why are you taunting us?

Terrovax: That doesn't matter. This secret should NEVER be revealed to anyone. “Sigh” Now that you've seen this, I can't let you leave...

Zara: We'll see about that.

She puts on her Shadowhawk outfit. Jez pulls out his gun and shoots Terrovax right in the face causing him to let out a grunt.

Terrovax: F***!!!

[Insert Jez's line]

[Insert Zara's line]

Terrovax: Ohhh. Now you've done it. I would have easily kidnapped you. BUT YOU'VE ANNOYED ME ALREADY.

In a fury, Terrovax bashes his shield and blade together as he engages battle with Jez and Zara.

Zara: I'll deal with him! Go along Jez!

Jez: Ok!

Jez runs off.

[Insert Terrovax's line]

Terrovax uses his sword to stab Zara in the chest, however, the sword bounces off and hits Terrovax in the face.

[Insert Terrovax's line]

Zara: How are you not dead?!

[Insert Terrovax's line]

Terrovax tries to bash his shield into Zara and attempts to kick her. Zara manages to dodge his every attempt.

[Insert Terrovax's line]

Zara kicks Terrovax in the chest causing him to pant in pain.

Terrovax: You stupid... stupid... STUPID WOMAN!!!

[Insert Zara's line]

She bashes him against a wall before running off quickly.

[Insert Zara's line]

[Insert Terrovax's line]

Suddenly, shadows are seen coming out of the distance.

???: What's going on here?!

[Insert Terrovax's line] Perfect! I'll use this! Thanks! Also, what about the extra lines? I'll include them in the script! Alright! But can you show them to me? I'd like to see what you've got!