Thread:DarthSaiyan8697/@comment-34595515-20190615215937/@comment-34595515-20190615230752

DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: What were your reviews on Chapters 10 and 11? Okay, so what I liked about chapter 10 is when Guest and Matt enters Cheff Pee Pee's Pizzaria and how Ronald McDonald trolls Burger King. I liked the way of how brutal Masked Menace is when he tasked his ISIS soldiers to bomb Pensacola as a whole in order to kill Sunny. Nice! Here are some things!

1. Guest and Matt going through Chef Pee Pee’s Pizzeria contained tons of references to one of my earlier stories from 2018, Chef Pee Pee’s Killing Spree!

2. Ronald McDonald burning Burger King was actually a real video from the YouTube RackaRacka! I see. By the way here's the outline of the chapter 3 script in case if you forgot:

Great Prince (James Bond Mario's universe): Your Majesty, we only found some information of the Sega Order when 00M learned about it as he's attending a meeting at the Council of Marios, but there are no statistics of the agents that he mentioned.

At the Black World of Nothingness

Mario: Who are you talking to?

James Bond: It is my boss and his secretary, who is also the Princess of the Mushroom Kingdom.

Additions for the script- Great Prince/M tells James Bond Mario that the SCIA (Sarasaland Central Intelligence Agency) had dispatched Alex Terry (James Bond Mario's Koopa Troopa friend that is based on CIA Agent Felix Leiter from the James Bond series) to the SML Universe to investigate.

-Original Mario will talk to Great Prince/M about the data of Rosalina, Jeffy, Goodman, and Brooklyn Guy (note: they're not brainwashed and I probrably told you that about weeks ago) with James Bond Mario's phone.

-After the James Bond Mario and Original Mario had a phone call with Great/M and the MKSS, Original Mario and the other Marios begin to have a discussion about the data of Jeffy, Rosalina, Goodman, and Brooklyn Guy. James Bond Mario suggests that he should take pictures of them, like he said during his phone call with Great Prince/M, as he is posing as Mario. James Bond Mario also suggests that Original Mario should teleport Great Prince and the MKSS to the SML Universe to make their secret headquarters in Pensacola as he (James Bond Mario) is posing as his SML counterpart. Ok! I’ll copy and paste the outline to Notes so I can see it myself.