Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-30571467-20190717131312/@comment-30571467-20190718014433

Rh390110478 wrote: MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

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MarioFan2009 wrote: Pillager 1 is seen in his office room drinking some orange juice.

Pillager 1: Can't wait for the raid to begin soon.

He continues drinking. Suddenly, a Vindicator holding a black body bag comes in rush running with shock and sweat.

Vindicator: BOSS. BOSS.

Pillager 1: So down there. What's the problem?

Vindicator: Boss. You NEED to see this. We found something that will be AMAZING for our plan!

Pillager 1: Cool! Shall I have a look!

Vindicator: Do it.

Pillager 1: So be it.

Pillager 1 opens up the bag. However, what is in there isn't shown.

Pillager 1: Oh. I've seen these types of species before.

Vindicator: You have?

Pillager 1: Yep! Only a few of them are living now.

Vindicator: Oh. Weird.

Pillager 1: Anyways, I have big plans for him. Send him to the “Parts and Service” room immediately and bring him back alive.

Vindicator: At your command sir.

The Vindicator runs to the PAS room.

A few hours later...

The Vindicator comes out.

Vindicator: It is done.

Pillager 1: Awesome. Bring him out.

The Vindicator then opens the door.

Pillager 1: Wow...

Some feet are seen approaching from the floor's angle.

Pillager 1: It is a success. He lives, even after having his head sliced off.

The figure then comes out of the room. It is revealed to be General Potter, however, he is covered in cybernetic parts. He raises his head up showing his right side covered in robotic parts. His right eye is also red.

General Potter: Ready to comply.

The screen cuts to black. Viceroy Gunray: This isn't possible!

Man! Sunny is going to be so shocked that her father was brought back as a cyborg! Yep! However, much like Jake, Sunny AND Denny will manage to turn General Potter back to normal during the Raid! After AFTWPII, General Potter will become a recurring character in the SFU and will serve as the EIGHTH flower person living now! The first being Sunny, second, Crystal, third Denny, fourth Trace and fifth to seventh, the unnamed purple, yellow and red flower people!

Anyways, what were your favourite scenes? 1. Amazing!

2, General Potter getting brought back as a cyborg! 1. Yep!

2. Nice! I am also planning on Potter on keeping his cyborg form like Jake after the story! Nice! Maybe after the story, he could consider joining the police! Awesome! Also, what do you think of the idea of General Potter coming back after being decapitated by Onion Cream? Cool! General Potter: Cool? COOL?! I got murdered by a ruthless troll, and now, I am coming back as a cyborg! How is that COOL?! It's that you become a cyborg! It's cool! General Potter: So be it...

Jake: Hey, at least my death wasn't as bad as yours...