Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-30571467-20190717083639/@comment-34595515-20190717090525

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Should I send a script/draft of how Zero Mech should be encountered in Chapter 33? Sure! Thanks for reminding me! It's ok!

Also, quick thing, could you send me of a little draft of where Dr. Morpheus is kidnapped? It might be required for the script. Ok!

Like how should it go? Pretty much, yeah. I meant how should the scene go? Should it be like Dr. Morpheus getting taken to the top of the clock tower? Mr. Meeseeks: Well uh...

You can just make it however you'd like! Or, in other words.

Palpatine: Do it. Chucky and Dan are seen dragging Dr. Morpheus into an elevator and it begins heading to the top of the clock tower.

Dr. Morpheus: Who are you two!? Let me go at once!

Chucky: Silence, prisoner!

Dan: We're taking you to our boss!

Dr. Morpheus: Who?

The elevator reaches the top and the three exit. Rover 2.0 is seen.

Rover 2.0: Hello, master.

Dr, Morpheus: Rover 2.0?! How dare you betray me like this?! Why?!

Rover 2.0: I got sick and tired of delivering supplies to the homeless! So, I decided to follow my own path which is to take over this city!

Dr. Morpheus: Never! I'll just deactivate you!

Dr, Morpheus grabs Rover 2.0 and looks on him.

Dr. Morpheus: Where is it? Where's the shut off switch?

Rover 2.0: "laughs" I knew you would attempt that so I disconnected it!

Dr. Morpheus: What?!

Rover 2.0: Also, while me and Chucky were bringing you here, I heard that a friend of yours named RH is coming to save you.

Dr. Morpheus: RH?!

Rover 2.0: Yes. But we'll see if he can save you in time!

Dr. Morpheus: Wait, what-

Dan grabs Dr. Morpheus, flies off the platform and places Dr, Morpheus on top of a large gear before flying back to Rover 2.0.

Dr. Morpheus: What is this?! What's going on?!

Rover 2.0: When the clock strikes 12:00, the bells will chime, the gears will shift and you will fall to your doom!

Rover 2.0 laughs evilly as the scene cuts to black.

What do you think? Awesome! Now here is my addition! I like how Rover 2.0 explained why he betrayed Dr. Morpheus.

(Continues where it left off)

Rover 2.0 laughs evilly.

Rover 2.0: Anyways, I’ve got other stuff to do rather than staying around here. See you later, “master”...

He laughs more and then leaves the area.

Dan: Where are you going?

Rover 2.0: I’m just getting some snacks. I’ll be back though!

Chucky: Ok!

While Rover 2.0 is leaving, he encounters what seems to be a robot holding a large sword and shield. It's back however, is turned to him.

Rover 2.0: Oh, well what do we have here?

The robot turns around, revealing heavy body armor and some red eyes.

???: Hi.

Rover 2.0: Hey! What are you doing here? Who are you?

???: My name is Zero Mech. I just decided to come here after my old place was destroyed.

Rover 2.0: Cool. I’m Rover 2.0 by the way. Nice to meet you!

Zero Mech: “speaking in some different language” (You too.)

Rover 2.0: Um, what?

Zero Mech: I was just speaking my language, Pangean.

Rover 2.0: Never heard of that before... anyways, would you like o help us out?

Zero Mech: Sure! But in what exactly?

Rover 2.0: “now lying” Well, we uh... were going to save the city from Masked Menace and his army!

Zero Mech: Cool! I saw his identity, so maybe I can be able to help you.

Rover 2.0: Ok! Thanks! Just head over there. “Points to his left”

Zero Mech: On it.

ZM then leaves.

Rover 2.0: “to himself laughing” What a complete fool...

Rover 2.0 leaves.

What do you think? I loved how Rover 2.0 tricked Zero Mech into thinking Masked Menace is the enemy even though he's redeemed!

But anyways, I'll use it!