Thread:CuldeeFell13/@comment-30571467-20190623073823/@comment-34482203-20190623225309

MarioFan2009 wrote: CuldeeFell13 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: CuldeeFell13 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: CuldeeFell13 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: The scene immediately opens to show Crystal's eyes closed. She opens her eyes and quickly gets shocked. It shows that she has her mouth taped and hands tied.

Crystal: (Muffled noises)

She looks behind her to see the ropes and looks around in a dark.

Crystal: (Muffled screaming)

Shortly after, a armoured figure is seen roaming around.

Crystal: (Muffled noises)

???: Hello there Crystal...

Crystal (Muffled): Who are you?!?!

???: Or should I just say...

The figure comes out of the shadows revealing it to be Ausar.

Ausar: DISGUSTING VILE B****...

Crystal (Muffled): A-AUSAR?!

Ausar: You know it be true Crystal... you really thought you have killed me with that blade? No... I am much more immortal than you could imagine.

Zuorsara, Luigi.EXE, Alice Angel (brainwashed) and Proto Rh enter the room.

Ausar: Ah. I see you have arrived.

Luigi.EXE: Nice! You kidnapped Crystal! That darling oh!

Proto Rh: Amazing. She'll be great for our plan!

Crystal (Muffled): WHAT?! I THOUGHT YOU WERE DEFEATED!!

Luigi.EXE: You might think that.

Alice Angel: But Proto Rh saved him from prison.

Zuorsara: So my Lord. What now?

Ausar: Get the "special one".

Proto Rh: OH YES!!

Luigi.EXE: But first, can we remove the tape off of her mouth? Her muffling will start annoying me...

Ausar: I'll get that.

Ausar approaches Crystal and untapes her mouth. Crystal let's out a terrified scream to which Ausar immediately punches her in the cheek with anger.

Ausar: STOP CRYING YOU LITTLE S***.

Crystal: WHAT DO YOU WANT YOU FILTHY CREATURE?!

Ausar: Oh. Isn't it obvious? You... surprised me in that attack... after I betrayed Galath. You... the masked figure known as Cosmonaut... I thought that was some sort of mysterious creature who outsmarted me like my old enemy Raidriar... but no... it was you... it HAD to be you... Crys-tal...

Crystal: Why are you doing this?! What for do you want?!

Ausar: I want to burn down this city... I will shred to it's LAST atom.

Crystal: But why?!

Ausar: (Small laughter) You see... I have been trying to win your heart for a year now. But, I decided to give up on that goal eventually. I got tired and decided to move on after knowing that YOU were the one who outsmarted me. Defeated me in that attack...

Zuorsara comes in with a red burned blade.

Ausar: Perfect. Zuorsara, do you your thing.

Zuorsara: Yes my Lord.

Crystal: Wait... WHAT ARE YOU--

It cuts to Ausar with his hands behind his back.

Crystal: NO!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

Crystal is heard screaming in pain while Zuorsara off-screen does something.

Ausar: Yes... serves you right...

Crystal: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

It goes back to Zuorsara moving the blade on Crystal's right cheek. He moves away to showing a horrifying large bloody scar that is leaking blood.

Crystal: AHHHHHHHH MY MOTHER NATURE!!!!!

Luigi.EXE: This is pretty entertaining.

Proto Rh: I agree!

Ausar: Heh heh heh.

Suddenly, Ausar starts choking Crystal.

Ausar: DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW LONG I HAVE PLANNED THIS?!?! I HAD A GREAT HEART FOR YOU!!!!

Crystal's face is seen purple choking.

Ausar: I LOVED YOU SO MUCH. I HAD BEEN WATCHING YOU AT YOUR FRIEND'S HOUSE TO KEEP AN EYE ON YOU! YOUR EVERY MOVE!!!! YOU HAD TO RUIN THIS REPUTATION OF MINE WITH YOU?!?! HUH?! DID YOU?! YOU... YOU... YOU FILTHY SLUT!!!!! OF COURSE IT HAD TO BE YOU... YOU WERE COSMONAUT ALL ALONG!!!!! MY GREATEST ENEMY EVER SINCE A WEEK OR TWO AGO!!!! FOR HOW LONG I HAVE BEEN HUNTING THE PERSON?! IT HAD TO BE YOU!!!!!!!!!

Ausar drops Crystal and pushes her back. Crystal gasps so much for breath.

Alice Angel: Damn.

Proto Rh: So many guys to torture her! Ausar for the win!

Luigi.EXE: I shouldn't have set him as a prisoner to the Death Skull! He could have joined us instead!

Ausar: (Laughs) I sure could have. (To Zuorsara) Zuorsara. You know what to do now.

Zuorsara: Sure do.

Crystal: NO!!!! PLEASE!!!!

Crystal screams as Zuorsara approaches. It then shows Luigi.EXE, Proto Rh, Alice Angel and Ausar watching with sadistic smiles on their faces while Crystal is heard screaming in horror as to what is happening to her.

Zuorsara: Done!

He moves away. It then shows the left side of Crystal cheek to which Zuorsara has made a bloody carve that says the word "SLUT".

Ausar: (Laughs) Perfect. I had my fun. Everybody, let's go and continue our plan. We will check on Crystal later. Luigi.EXE, you can be the co-leader. That is until something goes wrong, you can take my place as leader.

Luigi.EXE: Ok!

Zuorsara: Alright my Lord.

The five leave a bloody cheeked Crystal tied up as she is seen in tears. The door closes covering all the light and ending the scene. Ausar: THIS IS ABSURD! I WOULD NEVER DO THIS TO MY CRYSTAL!

1 year later.

Ausar: She deserved it.

(Suddenly Culdee is behind him with an angered face)

Culdee: I HOPE YOU NEVER GET FORGIVED!

Ausar: But they forgived Denny!

Denny: YAY! I'M FORGIV-

(Culdee stabs Denny in the heart killing him)

Culdee: That was for Day Zero! Yeah. So basically, this is what will happen: During the final battle of "Agamemnon Counterpart", Ausar will get defeated by Cosmonaut not knowing that she will ACTUALLY Crystal herself. In an epilogue of that story, he will be desperate to kill who he thinks is another person. Later, when he finds out that Cosmonaut is Crystal in "Infinity Hunt", his relationship and love will be destroyed for her and he will set out to kill her instead. However, when Ausar is redeemed, his relationship for her will revert back to normal!

Anyways, what were your favourite scenes? To be truthful and all I don't think I have one. This whole sneak peak was heartbreaking Yeah. Especially what Ausar did to Crystal... just wait until Sunny finds out about this. What do you think she would do? Prolly brutally murder him. Hope see suceeds.

Culdee: If Crystal forgives Ausar i'm going to be mad.

Also Culdee: Well Sunny forgived Denny.

Culdee: *sigh* REEEEEEEEEE!

Anyways, nice! I'm really excited for Infinity Hunt! SPOILER ALERT: Crystal will forgive Ausar in possibly Chapter 23 or when the story progresses!

Also, I am hoping for "Agamemnon Counterpart" and "Infinity Hunt" to have 25 Chapters! And I am glad you are excited! Culdee: I'm excited alright!

Also Culdee: Me too! And why am I even here?