Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-30571467-20190717083639/@comment-34595515-20190717095000

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

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MarioFan2009 wrote: Should I send a script/draft of how Zero Mech should be encountered in Chapter 33? Sure! Thanks for reminding me! It's ok!

Also, quick thing, could you send me of a little draft of where Dr. Morpheus is kidnapped? It might be required for the script. Ok!

Like how should it go? Pretty much, yeah. I meant how should the scene go? Should it be like Dr. Morpheus getting taken to the top of the clock tower? Mr. Meeseeks: Well uh...

You can just make it however you'd like! Or, in other words.

Palpatine: Do it. Chucky and Dan are seen dragging Dr. Morpheus into an elevator and it begins heading to the top of the clock tower.

Dr. Morpheus: Who are you two!? Let me go at once!

Chucky: Silence, prisoner!

Dan: We're taking you to our boss!

Dr. Morpheus: Who?

The elevator reaches the top and the three exit. Rover 2.0 is seen.

Rover 2.0: Hello, master.

Dr, Morpheus: Rover 2.0?! How dare you betray me like this?! Why?!

Rover 2.0: I got sick and tired of delivering supplies to the homeless! So, I decided to follow my own path which is to take over this city!

Dr. Morpheus: Never! I'll just deactivate you!

Dr, Morpheus grabs Rover 2.0 and looks on him.

Dr. Morpheus: Where is it? Where's the shut off switch?

Rover 2.0: "laughs" I knew you would attempt that so I disconnected it!

Dr. Morpheus: What?!

Rover 2.0: Also, while me and Chucky were bringing you here, I heard that a friend of yours named RH is coming to save you.

Dr. Morpheus: RH?!

Rover 2.0: Yes. But we'll see if he can save you in time!

Dr. Morpheus: Wait, what-

Dan grabs Dr. Morpheus, flies off the platform and places Dr, Morpheus on top of a large gear before flying back to Rover 2.0.

Dr. Morpheus: What is this?! What's going on?!

Rover 2.0: When the clock strikes 12:00, the bells will chime, the gears will shift and you will fall to your doom!

Rover 2.0 laughs evilly as the scene cuts to black.

What do you think? Awesome! Now here is my addition! I like how Rover 2.0 explained why he betrayed Dr. Morpheus.

(Continues where it left off)

Rover 2.0 laughs evilly.

Rover 2.0: Anyways, I’ve got other stuff to do rather than staying around here. See you later, “master”...

He laughs more and then leaves the area.

Dan: Where are you going?

Rover 2.0: I’m just getting some snacks. I’ll be back though!

Chucky: Ok!

While Rover 2.0 is leaving, he encounters what seems to be a robot holding a large sword and shield. It's back however, is turned to him.

Rover 2.0: Oh, well what do we have here?

The robot turns around, revealing heavy body armor and some red eyes.

???: Hi.

Rover 2.0: Hey! What are you doing here? Who are you?

???: My name is Zero Mech. I just decided to come here after my old place was destroyed.

Rover 2.0: Cool. I’m Rover 2.0 by the way. Nice to meet you!

Zero Mech: “speaking in some different language” (You too.)

Rover 2.0: Um, what?

Zero Mech: I was just speaking my language, Pangean.

Rover 2.0: Never heard of that before... anyways, would you like o help us out?

Zero Mech: Sure! But in what exactly?

Rover 2.0: “now lying” Well, we uh... were going to save the city from Masked Menace and his army!

Zero Mech: Cool! I saw his identity, so maybe I can be able to help you.

Rover 2.0: Ok! Thanks! Just head over there. “Points to his left”

Zero Mech: On it.

ZM then leaves.

Rover 2.0: “to himself laughing” What a complete fool...

Rover 2.0 leaves.

What do you think? I loved how Rover 2.0 tricked Zero Mech into thinking Masked Menace is the enemy even though he's redeemed!

But anyways, I'll use it! Yeah. Also, when Chapter 33 is released, I can tell you how Zero Mech will notice the true nature behind Rover 2.0's doing and will go on to tell the heroes!

Also, is it ok if I ask an important question? 1. Ok!

2. Sure! Alright.

So basically, when you told me about Dr. Morpheus’ original twist, before Rover 2.0 became the traitor instead, you said that, he will usurper Denny's army and use them to destroy the city. However, MOST of the army have been sent to prison such as Past Saiko, LOLT and PLA-1137, ultimately defeated such as Alternative Jez, Alternative Zara, Cyber Guest, Glitched Jesse and Dr. Robotnik or have retreated such as Animatronic Jesse and his friends, Cassie and Winslow and Bulldog.

With that said, everyone I just mentioned might not come back, hence only tiny pieces of the army are left remaining such as Past Buckaroo, Terrovax and Skulldozer. PB and Terrovax might be defeated in the next chapter, now leaving us with Rover 2.0, Chucky, Dan, Dark Tari and Skulldozer.

So, I have one question, Will Rover 2.0 go to Dark Tari for help and the two will destroy the city together? Actually, I'va already planned for a final battle between RH and Rover 2.0 to occur after Dan and Chucky are defeated in Chapter 34! Ok!

But what about Dark Tari? Is she on her own? Dark Tari will be on her own and will be the last villain fought during the Xen Invasion! Ok, so that means she and Rover 2.0 will be the main threats? (Though the two are separate)

Also, while a battle between Terrovax and Past Buckaroo is happening, may I show you a draft that reveals Terrovax's true face? It won't be a twist, but rather horrifying! 1. Pretty much!

2. Sure! 1. Ok!

2. Here it is.

It starts off with Terrovax and Past Buckaroo fighting Zara, Jez, Buckaroo, El Tigre, Frida and Zoe. (You can insert more character if you'd like, RH)

Past Buckaroo: You can never win!

Buckaroo: Says the one who is a pre-redeemed version of me!

Past Buckaroo: I HAVE MUCH MORE AWESOME QUALITIES THAN YOU, POST-BUCKAROO...

Zara and Jez then fight Terrovax face to face.

Terrovax: We meet once again...

Jez: Yeah...

Zara: And this is our last encounter!

Terrovax: So be it... Shadowhawk.

Terrovax then turns to Zara's right (his left) and attempts to bash his shield into Jez. He misses and Jez kicks him in the chest.

Terrovax: MOTHER F*****!!!

Zara: This ends now Terrovax...

Zara then strikes Terrovax in face again, however, this time, his mask falls off.

Terrovax: OW!! WHAT THE F***?!

Jez: Huh?

Jez and Zara are terrified as to what they see next.

Zara: OH MY GOD!!!

Jez: WHAT THE HELL?!?!

Terrovax's true face is revealed to be a black figure with red eyes oozing green blood. His "ears" are also large deer horns and he is foaming in the mouth.

Terrovax: I REALLY wish you hadn't done that...

What do yo think? Amazing! I loved Jez and Zara's reactions to Terrovax's real face!

Also, I'm planning for this thing to happen when Past Buckaroo and Terrovax are defeated!

Let's just say that Past Buckaroo should NOT have blamed their failure on Terrovax and DEFINITELY not calling him an insulting name.. Terrovax will NOT take it well.. 1. Nice!

2. What could it be?

Scratch and Grounder: We wanna know!

Manny: Patient you guys...

Also, what do you think about Terrovax's true face? 1. Here it is! What do you think of it? Even if Buckaroo is your original character, does his past self deserve it?

After Terrovax and Past Buckaroo are defeated.

Past Buckaroo: (to Terrovax) This is all your fault, demon face! Do you realize what Masked Menace will do when he finds out you failed?!

Terrovax: (to Past Buckaroo) I failed?!?

Past Buckaroo: YES, YOU FREAKSHOW!

Upon hearing this insult, Terrovax goes beserk and charges at Past Buckaroo, causing him to run. Past Buckaroo ends up stopping when cornered at the inside of a truck container just as Terrovax crashes into him. Jez shuts the container's doors while Jake places cement blocks in front of the doors to block it. Sounds of Terrovax beating up Past Buckaroo are heard from inside the container as it shakes.

Jake: Just something for them to pass the time with before the police comes to take them!

Anyways, what did you think?