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DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: Continuation of Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M vs. Dastardly Three: Kung Fu Mario vs. Murder Man and his gang!

At Murder Man's hideout, Murder Man and his villains start discussing about their plans.

Murder Man: Alright gang, I have a plan today.

Spiderman: What is it, Murder Man?

[Insert Murder Man's and his villains' lines about robbing a bank]

Mega Maid: Cool!

Meanwhile, Sunny is spying on Murder Man and his gang by peeking through the window.

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert what Sunny is about to do] Unknown to Sunny, Kung Fu Mario, who is in his plumber uniform but with Sun Wukong's boots, is also spying on the villains by peeking through a hole.

Kung Fu Mario: These bastards think they'll rob a bank? However, they know nothing about Shaolin Kung Fu and its 1560 year history...

At a city bank, Murder Man and his villains are seen holding bags filled with money.

[Insert Murder Man's and his villains' lines]

Sunny, who is in her Iron Flower armor, arrives at the bank where Murder Man and his gang stole as Parappa, Frida, Paula, and PJ Beeri came right after her.

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Murder Man's line]

Suddenly, Mr. M appears right in front of Sunny.

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert PJ Beeri's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: I see you pure evil villains are trying to rob a bank. Allow me to show you trash what I'm about to do!

Murder Man and the others analyze Mr. M's appearance.

[Insert Murder Man's and his villains' line]

End of Part 1 Murder Man: Today, we will be robbing the bank and spending the money to acquire Sonic Drive-In and shut them down so they won't sell anymore chill dogs!

Spider Man: Nice! What for?

Mega Maid: It's to get back at Sonic the Hedgehog for running into us and making us drop our bank loot into the lake.

Ink Brute: We would've gotten away with it if it weren't for his triple spin!

Murder Man X: Anyways, we'll be robbing the bank soon.

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Sunny: They're planning another robbery. I'll have to bring my friends to stop him.

Sunny leaves.

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Murder Man: Ok! We got the money!

Ink Brute: Now, we need to shut down Sonic Drive-In.

Mega Maid: Without chilli dogs, Sonic shall suffer!

Spider Man: Yeah! Just like when I taught J. Jonah Jameson a "lesson"..

Murder Man X: We should be there soon.

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Sunny: There they are!

Murder Man: S***! It's the Iron Flower!

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Sunny: The f***?

Parappa: Who is that?

Frida: Why does he look like Mario?

Paula: Especially since he looks like a Dragon Ball ripoff. (RH: Don't take this seriously.)

PJ Berri: I haven't heard of it.

Parappa: Me neither.

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Murder Man: Apparently, his name is Sun Wukong Mario?

Mega Maid: What kind of name is that?

Spider Man: I know, right?

Ink Brute: Like when I faced some inkling named "The Toxic Inkling". He wasn't very toxic at all.

Murder Man X: True.

​​​​​​ Part 2:

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: I don't know why are you villains think that I'm Great Sage the Equal to Heaven (Sun Wukong Mario). Allow me to introduce to myself. I am the protector of the innocents, conqueror of evil, and defender of justice! The Red Fire! MR. M!!!!!

Mr. M does a pose similar to one of the Ginyu Force Members.

Spiderman: Mr. M?

Sunny suddenly has a flashback of The Dastardly Three killed by Mr. M.

[Insert Sunny's line]

Kung Fu Mario: Oh yeah, the pure evil bandits that I killed in front of you and your friends. I'll kill those merciless bastards for robbing banks and harming innocent people!

Part 2:

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: I don't know why are you villains think that I'm Great Sage the Equal to Heaven (Sun Wukong Mario). Allow me to introduce to myself. I am the protector of the innocents, conqueror of evil, and defender of justice! The Red Fire! MR. M!!!!!

Mr. M does a pose similar to one of the Ginyu Force Members.

Spiderman: Mr. M?

Sunny suddenly has a flashback of The Dastardly Three killed by Mr. M.

[Insert Sunny's line]

Kung Fu Mario: Oh yeah, the pure evil bandits that I killed in front of you and your friends. I'll kill those merciless bastards for robbing banks and harming innocent people!

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert PJ Beeri's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Now, which one of you villains shall fight me first?

Ink Brute: I will, you weakling!

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

'''Then, Denny shows up late. (Note: Denny's name is already cleared)'''

Denny: Sorry that I'm late, you guys. What did I miss anyway?

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert Ink Brute's line to Mr. M]

[Insert Ink Brute's action.]

End of Part 2 Sunny: He's the one who killed The Dastardly Three!

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Sunny: Usually, we just send them to prison.

Paula: True!

Parappa: Not slaughter them.

PJ Berri: Except for robots.

_________________________

Frida: I don't know about him. I heard he broke Meggy's legs once!

Parappa: True! Sunny said her legs snapped like a twig!

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'Sunny: Nothing. We're just watching this person about to kill more robbers.

Denny: Um, ok?

Ink Brute: (to Mr. M) Prepare for your end!

Ink Brute punches Mr. M, but nothing happens. Part 3:

Ink Brute punches Mr. M, but nothing happens.

Ink Brute: What the?!

Ink Brute punhes Mr. M two times, but nothing happens stil and only gave Mr. M some bleeding in the mouth.

[Insert Murder Man's line]

[Insert Mrga Maid's line]

[Insert Murder Man X's line]

Ink Brute: Why you?!

Ink Brute tries to deliver Mr. M punches, but Mr. M keeps dodging Ink Brute's fists.

Ink Brute: Why do my punches always miss?!

Ink Brute continues to punch Mr. M, but still missed a single hit.

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert PJ Beeri's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

Ink Brute: STOP DODGING, WILL YOU?!?!

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: I will.

Ink Brute starts punching Mr. M, only for him blocking Ink Brute's fists with a single finger.

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert Mega Maid's line]

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert Murder Man's line]

[Insert Murder Man X's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Is that all you got, Ink Ape?

[Insert Ink Brute' line]

Mr. M unleashes fiery aura and starts giving Ink Brute a flurry of punches all over him.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Atatatatatatatatatata! Wota!

'''Mr. M punches Ink Brute in the face as if somebody pushed him away. Ink Brute falls to the ground after Mr. M delivers him a final blow.'''

Kung Fu Mario (narrating): Wing Chun Rending Fists (咏春白裂拳, In Chinese: Yong Chun Bai Lie Quan, In Japanese: Eishun Hyakuretsu Ken)!

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

Ink Brute gets back up after Mr. M punched him rapidly.

Ink Brute: Your fists are as ticklish like a mosquito! I'm gonna end you!!!!!

[Insert Paula's line]

Insert PJ Beeri's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: You're already dead.

[Insert Ink Brute's last words]

'''Ink Brute's body starts to expand and deform, while his other side of his head starts to inflate. Ink Brute explodes with a fiery explosion after his body is getting inflated and deformed.'''

[Insert Sunny's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert Parappa's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert Paula's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert PJ Beeri's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert Denny's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert Frida's line when seeing Ink Brute explodes]

[Insert the villains' lines]

After Ink Brute explodes with a fiery explosion, Mr. M glares at the villains.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Who's next?

[Insert Spiderman's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Well well well, if that isn't "Peter Parker"?

[Insert Spiderman's line]

End of Part 3

Also, any updates on Rh Superheroes, teaser art, and the COM Chapter 3 script? Murder Man: How is he not getting knocked out?!

Mega Maid: He is bleeding, but besides that, it's nothing!

Murder Man X: Is he a god or something?!

_________________________

Sunny: Well, Ink Brute sure isn't doing well!

Paula: True! I thought he was a Russian champion!

Parappa: Agreed!

PJ Berri: "eating donuts" Now, this is MY kind of entertainment!

Denny: Yeah!

_________________________

Paula: The heck?!

Denny: How is that possible?

Parappa: One finger?

Mega Maid: That can't be possible!

Spider Man: Yet before I turned to evil, I stopped a train with my bare body!

Murder Man: (to Spider Man) You used to be good?

Murder Man X: Just like Firestar and Ice Man before they turned on us!

_________________________

Ink Brute: WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME?!?!?!?!?!?!

_________________________

Denny: What the f*** is he saying?!?!

Parappa: I don't know! I don't understand chinese OR japanese!

Sunny: True! Our planet, Greenhouse didn't have that kind of language!

Paula: What else what it like? Did you have your own language?

_________________________

Paula: Did he just put a spell on Ink Brute?

PJ Berri: I don't know.

_________________________

Sunny: OH S***!

Parappa: OH GOD! SOME OF HIS INK GOT IN MY MOUTH!

Paula: S***! IT'S ALL OVER MY JACKET! DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO GET STAINS OUT OF IT?!?!

PJ Berri: NO! MY DONUTS ARE WASTED, MAN!

Denny: Seriously?! That's what you're (PJ Berri) concerned about?!

Frida; Ah, s***!

Murder Man: Dang it! Now, our gang is down to four!

Mega Maid: I know!

Murder Man X: True!

Spider Man: I can't stand him (Sun Wukong Mario) anymore!

_________________________

Spider Man: That's it! I'm out of here-

_________________________

Spider Man: How did you know my real name?!? ​​​​​​ Late, because I need a break from it.

Part 4:

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: A friend of mine told me and I read comics about you. (Note: Kung Fu Mario did not reveal his identity.)

'''A flashback of a Teenage Kung Fu Mario packing his school supplies. Soon, a goomba approaches him.'''

Goomba: Hey, Mario!

Kung Fu Mario: Hey Henry, how's it going?

Henry: Can I ask you something, Mario?

Kung Fu Mario: Sure.

Henry: Are you a fan of Marvel?

Kung Fu Mario: No, not really, but I heard them. I might theeir comics sometime so I'll be interested in it.

Henry: Do you know Spiderman?

Kung Fu Mario: Yeah, I heard about him. He has spider abilities and shooting webs from his arms.

Henry: So... Did you know his real name is Peter Parker?

Kung Fu Mario: Huh, didn't know that.

Henry: Well, if you didn't know about it, you should read his comics.

Kung Fu Mario: Okay, I'll try to read them.

Henry: Just to let you know, he's also gay.

Kung Fu Mario: Really?

'''Kung Fu Mario is seen on his bed reading Spiderman comics on his phone. Flasback ends.'''

Kung Fu Mario: And that's how knew about your identity, Peter. True story.

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert the villains' lines]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Oh and speaking of Sun Wukong Mario, you and your villains kerp calling me his name, right? He's actually over there.

Spiderman: What?

Mr. M points at Sun Wukong Mario, who is blindfolded so he can't attack Sunny and Denny.

Sun Wukong Mario: Hey Mr. M! *In his thoughts* I knew who you actually are, Kung Fu Mario.

[Insert Spiderman's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: What's the matter, Peter? Why are you acting like a coward all of a sudden? Why don't you use your web slingers at me and detect me with your spider sense as we're fighting, I don't really care.

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Denny's line]

[Insert the villains' line]

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert Spiderman's action]

End of Part 4 Spider Man: Ok?

PJ Berri: Cool!

Sunny: Haven't realy read those.

Frida: Me too.

Denny: Same.

Parappa: I did!

Paula: Cool!

Murder Man: Ew! Spider Man was a hero?!

Mega Maid: That's disgusting!

Murder Man X: I never knew Sun Wukong Mario read Spider Man's comics

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Spider Man: Please, man! Don't hurt me!

Sunny: I don't have a good feeling about this.

Parappa: Me neither.

Paula: True.

PJ Berri: "eating popcorn" This will be entertaining!

Denny: (to PJ Berri) Are you going to share those?

Frida: (to Denny) Um, don't you only eat dirt?

Denny: Right! I forgot.

Murder Man: Spider Man. This is your last chance to redeem yourself.

Mega Maid: If you fail, you will never rise from the ashes of your shame and humiliation!

Murder Man X: Do not fail us.

Spider Man: I'll try to beat him.

Spider Man shoots web at Kung Fu Mario. Sorry that I'm late, Rh, since I need a break from it for a while.

Part 5:

Spiderman shoots webs at Mr. M and lands on his face.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M (in his thoughts): Spider silk!

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert the villains' lines]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Sunny's line]

'''Spiderman starts wrapping Mr. M into a cocoon as he is struggling to remove the web from his face. Once Spiderman is done, Mr. M is nothing but a large white sac.'''

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Denny's lime]

[Insert PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert the villains' lines]

The white cocoon containing Mr. M starts to rumble.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M (muffled): Hrrrrrrrgh...

[Insert the villains' lines]

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert Parappa's line]

[Insert PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

Mr. M breaks free from the cocoon made by Spiderman and unleashes a fiery aura around him.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: HAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGH!!!!!!!

[Insert Spiderman's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert PJ Berri's line]

[Insert Sunny's line]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Spiderman's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Shaolin Kung Fu has a 1560 year history! Scums like you are unable to defeat me!

[Insert Spiderman's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Say, you have spider sense, right? Will it work on one of my master's techniques?

[Insert Spiderman's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Then allow show you, Shaolin Kung Fu Secret Technique: Yin Yang Point Spirit (阴阳点心, in Chinese: Yin Yang Dian Xin, in Japanese: Onmyo Tenshin)!

When Mr. M starts moving, he creates a trail of afterimages as he's surrounding Spiderman.

[Insert Spiderman's line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

[Insert the villains' line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

[Insert Denny's line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

[Insert PJ Berri's line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

[Insert Parappa's line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

Sunny activates her boosters and sees Mr. M move in a pattern of a Yin Yang as he's using Yin Yang Point Spirit.

[Insert Sunny's line when seeing Mr. M using Yin Yang Point Spirit]

[Insert Frida's line]

[Insert Paula's line]

[Insert Spiderman's line]

As Mr. M and his afterimages hit Spiderman in his blind spots, [Insert what happened to Spiderman].

[Insert Spiderman's line]

End of Part 5

Hey Rh, which part in the teaser art and the chapter 3 script are you on now? Also, when will you change the scene of Kung Fu Mario fighting Toro in chapter 27? Here's the revised scene of it:

Any revisions you want to make?

Zoe is seen looking through the lab.

Zoe: So far, all I see are some more experiments Masked Menace is doing.

Toro is seen emerging from an air vent.

Toro: I got you now!

Suddenly, a figure grabs Toro, pulls him back and throws him into a hallway. The figure is revealed to be a version of Mario wearing a straw hat and a jedi robe.

Kung Fu Mario: I saw you trying to attack that girl. I see you need a lesson for that.

Toro: Fine! I’ll kill you too!

Toro lunges at Kung Fu Mario, but he puts both his index and middle fingers on Toro’s temples, causing him to become immobilized.

Toro: The f***?! I can’t move!

Kung Fu Mario: I struck a hidden pressure point called Touya (头亜). Your body will move by my orders.

Toro: What?!

Kung Fu Mario: Jump into the ceiling.

Toro jumped into the ceiling as Kung Fu Mario told him to.

Toro: Ow!

Kung Fu Mario: Bend and spank yourself.

Toro bends over and then starts spanking himself, causing him to wail.

Kung Fu Mario: (sarcastic) You’ve been a bad tuna!

Toro: IT HURTS SO MUCH!

Kung Fu Mario: Bang yourself into the wall.

Toro leaps into the air and bangs his head against the wall, causing him to see the pain.

Toro: OOOWWWWW!!!

Kung Fu Mario: Only a fool seeks meaning from a bowl of oatmeal.

Toro: Are you calling me a fool?!

Kung Fu Mario: No, a bowl of oatmeal. Now, enter this locker for me.

Toro heads to a locker and locks himself in. Kung Fu Mario walks away from the locker where Toro is trapped.

Toro: Hey! Let me out!

Kung Fu Mario: Well, maybe now you learned your lesson about not fighting girls! See you sometime!

Kung Fu Mario enters a portal and it shuts. I'll get to them later. I'm currently talking to MF2009 on Discord.

In the meantime, check out this cool thing I made!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pw45R6GX82s I'll try watch it soon. What about the COM Chapter 3 script, the teaser art, and the revised scene of Chapter 27? Which part in the teaser art are you on now? So it's just Little Buddy coming out of his shell, but congratulations for making your first animation! Any updates on the COM Chapter 3 script, the teaser art, and the revised scene of Chapter 27? Which part in the teaser art are you on now?