Thread:DarthSaiyan8697/@comment-34482203-20190710035640/@comment-33032843-20190710195332

CuldeeFell13 wrote: DarthSaiyan8697 wrote: CuldeeFell13 wrote: Sunny: Denny!

Masked Menace freezes in place, turns around and spots Sunny.

Masked Menace: I was wondering when you would show up again.

Sunny: Remove your mask.

Masked Menace: Why should I? What do you think you will see?

Sunny: The face of my brother.

Masked Menace removes his mask.

Denny: I keep telling you. I don’t know anyone named Denny. My name is Masked Menace.

Sunny: I know you’re still the brother I once knew. Despite everything you’ve done such as Day Zero, I know you can still turn back!

Denny: It is too late.

Sunny: It isn’t. Leave with me. It’s not too late to turn back.

Denny: Really? You’ll let me change?

Sunny: Yes. Anything for my brother.

Denny begins to hand Sunny his sword, but suddenly a mysterious figure pushed Sunny and punched Denny in the face. The figure is revealed to be Mr. M.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: What do you think you're doing, flower girl?! You almost got yourself killed by that psychopathic villain!

Sunny: But he's my brother!

Denny gets back up after Mr. M punched him in the face.

Denny: You stay out of this!

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: You're already de-

(Suddenly a blast happens pushing Kun Fu Mario and Denny away)

Kun Fu Mario: The hell?!

(A portal then opens revealing Jeffygeist)

Jeffygeist: There's no way your hurting my friend!

Denny: Giest... your back.

Jeffygeist: I got bored so I decided to see what you were doing. However when I came back I saw Mr. Straw Hat over here trying to kill you!

Kun Fu Mario: It's Kun Fu Mario. Also known as Mr. M-

Jeffygeist: Yawn.

Kun Fu Mario: ... Well then. If your going to protect him, perhaps I should kill you too!

Jeffygeist: Bring it on Kun Fu Loser!

(The two charge at eachother)

Kun Fu Mario: Your already dead.

Jeffygeist: I know you are but what am I?

Kun Fu Mario: WHAT?!

(Jeffygeist pushes Kun Fu Mario)

Kun Fu Mario: Impossible. My secret pressure point called Lunya should have worked!

Jeffygeist: I faced things more powerful then your Lunya crap! Now leave my friend alone!

Kun Fu Mario: Never. I won't let that flower monstrosity kill the flower girl.

Jeffygeist: F*** THE FLOWER GIRL!

(The two continue fighting. Sunny runs up to Denny)

Sunny: You alright.

Denny: I'm good.

Sunny: Alright. Take my hand!

(Denny reaches for Sunny's hand only for him to grab his sword and attack Sunny)

Denny: I SWEAR I WILL KILL YOU!

Sunny: Oh for gods sake. This isn't gonna work!

(Sunny calls for the others)

Sunny: Guys! I need backup!

(Meggy, Tari and Petra run up)

Denny: YOU ALL ARE FOOLS! I WILL KILL SUNNY IF IT'S THE LAST THING I-

(Kun Fu Mario stabs Jeffygeist in the heart)

Denny: GEIST!

Jeffygeist: You should have gone for the head!

(Jeffygeist suckerpunches Kun Fu Mario before entering a portal and leaving)

Kun Fu Mario: COME BACK YOU COWARD!

(Kun Fu Mario looks at Denny)

Kun Fu Mario: Your already dea-

Sunny: NO!

(Sunny punches Kun Fu Mario causing him to fall off the plane)

Kun Fu Mario: You made a hard choice.

(Kun Fu Mario then exits through a portal)

Denny: I WILL KILL YOU ALL-

(Sr. Pelo slaps Denny)

Sr Pelo: STOP IT!

(He slaps him again)

Sr Pelo: STOPIDDY STOP IT!

(Another slap)

Sr Pelo: STOP IT!

Denny: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Fin. LOL, I find your version of my ending is humorous. To be honest here, I have known Kung Fu Mario well. He is kind of based on Kenshiro, the protagonist of the Nani meme anime. He (Kung Fu Mario) is also an experience demon hunter. Here's my version of your ending of mine (not taking this seriously):

Sunny: Denny!

Masked Menace freezes in place, turns around and spots Sunny.

Masked Menace: I was wondering when you would show up again.

Sunny: Remove your mask.

Masked Menace: Why should I? What do you think you will see?

Sunny: The face of my brother.

Masked Menace removes his mask.

Denny: I keep telling you. I don’t know anyone named Denny. My name is Masked Menace.

Sunny: I know you’re still the brother I once knew. Despite everything you’ve done such as Day Zero, I know you can still turn back!

Denny: It is too late.

Sunny: It isn’t. Leave with me. It’s not too late to turn back.

Denny: Really? You’ll let me change?

Sunny: Yes. Anything for my brother.

Denny begins to hand Sunny his sword, but suddenly a mysterious figure pushed Sunny and punched Denny in the face. The figure is revealed to be Mr. M.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: What do you think you're doing, flower girl?! You almost got yourself killed by that psychopathic villain!

Sunny: But he's my brother!

Denny gets back up after Mr. M punched him in the face.

Denny: You stay out of this!

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: You're already de-

Suddenly, a blast happens pushing Kung Fu Mario and Denny away

Kung Fu Mario: The hell?!

A portal then opens revealing Jeffygeist

Jeffygeist: There's no way you're hurting my friend!

Denny: Geist... you're back.

Jeffygeist: I got bored, so I decided to see what you were doing. However, when I came back, I saw Mr. Straw Hat over here is trying to kill you!

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Call me what you want. You should have stopped me before I punched him.

[Insert Jeffygeist's line]

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: He's already dead.

[Insert Jeffygeist's line]

Denny attempts to move, but unfortunately for him, his body is paralyzed due to Mr. M punched him in the face.

Denny: What the?! I can't move!

Kung Fu Mario: Just before your partner attacked me in the back, I have struck a secret pressure point called Lunya (轮雅). Your body will move against your will.

Denny's sword holding hand starts moving by itself as it is heading for Denny's neck.

Denny: THE F***?!? MY HAND IS MOVING ON IT'S OWN!!!

Sunny: What are you doing?!?

[Insert Jeffygeist's line]

Mr. M gets his needle-sized golden sword from his pocket and changed the length of it to it's original state. Mr. M then removes case of his sword and puts it on Denny's left hand.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: As a bonus, you will get decapitated with my sword, too! Now think about your crimes and your relationship with your sister!

Denny: What?!?

[Insert Jeffygeist's line]

Sunny: No!

Meggy: The heck?!

Tari: Are you crazy?!

Petra: Why?!

Denny's hands continues to head for his own neck.

Denny: No, please-

Denny gets decapitated by both his sword and Mr. M's.

Denny: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sunny: OH GOD!

[Insert Jeffygeist's line]

Meggy: Dang!

Tari: The f***?!?

Petra: S***!

Denny's head falls to ground as Mr. M retrieves his golden sword from Denny's corpse and shrinks its length to those of a needle. He puts the sword into his pocket and then gets a small bag from his pocket. Mr. M changes the size of the bag and placed Denny's corpse into it as he was about to give the bag to Sunny. He then pats Sunny's shoulder and gave her a kind smile.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: I have a way to revive him.

Sunny: You do?

Mr. M nods kindly and then stares angrily at Jeffygeist. He looks at Sunny before he was about to fight Jeffygeist.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: (to Sunny) Leave and get out of here, I can fight him on my own.

Sunny: Okay! (revise if you want)

Sunny and the others leave the room just before Mr. M is about to fight Jeffygeist. (revise it if you want)

Jeffygeist: You will pay for murdering my friend! (revise it if you want)

King Fu Mario/Mr. M: If you think you will defeat me by avenging your friend, then you shall have the same fate as him!

Jeffygeist: Bring it on, Kung Fu Loser!

End of Part 1 Coolio! Heres my edit!

Sunny: Denny!

Masked Menace freezes in place, turns around and spots Sunny.

Masked Menace: I was wondering when you would show up again.

Sunny: Remove your mask.

Masked Menace: Why should I? What do you think you will see?

Sunny: The face of my brother.

Masked Menace removes his mask.

Denny: I keep telling you. I don’t know anyone named Denny. My name is Masked Menace.

Sunny: I know you’re still the brother I once knew. Despite everything you’ve done such as Day Zero, I know you can still turn back!

Denny: It is too late.

Sunny: It isn’t. Leave with me. It’s not too late to turn back.

Denny: Really? You’ll let me change?

Sunny: Yes. Anything for my brother.

Denny begins to hand Sunny his sword, but suddenly a mysterious figure pushed Sunny and punched Denny in the face. The figure is revealed to be Mr. M.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: What do you think you're doing, flower girl?! You almost got yourself killed by that psychopathic villain!

Sunny: But he's my brother!

Denny gets back up after Mr. M punched him in the face.

Denny: You stay out of this!

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: You're already de-

Suddenly, a blast happens pushing Kung Fu Mario and Denny away

Kung Fu Mario: The hell?!

A portal then opens revealing Jeffygeist

Jeffygeist: There's no way you're hurting my friend!

Denny: Geist... you're back.

Jeffygeist: I got bored, so I decided to see what you were doing. However, when I came back, I saw Mr. Straw Hat over here is trying to kill you!

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: Call me what you want. You should have stopped me before I punched him.

Jeffygeist: What are you talking about!?

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: He's already dead.

Jeffygeist: NANI!?

Denny attempts to move, but unfortunately for him, his body is paralyzed due to Mr. M punched him in the face.

Denny: What the?! I can't move!

Kung Fu Mario: Just before your partner attacked me in the back, I have struck a secret pressure point called Lunya (轮雅). Your body will move against your will.

Denny's sword holding hand starts moving by itself as it is heading for Denny's neck.

Denny: THE F***?!? MY HAND IS MOVING ON IT'S OWN!!!

Sunny: What are you doing?!?

Jeffygeist: STOP THIS NOW!

Mr. M gets his needle-sized golden sword from his pocket and changed the length of it to it's original state. Mr. M then removes case of his sword and puts it on Denny's left hand.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: As a bonus, you will get decapitated with my sword, too! Now think about your crimes and your relationship with your sister!

Denny: What?!?

Jeffygeist: STOP! HE'S MY ONLY FRIEND!

Sunny: No!

Meggy: The heck?!

Tari: Are you crazy?!

Petra: Why?!

Denny's hands continues to head for his own neck.

Denny: No, please-

Denny gets decapitated by both his sword and Mr. M's.

Denny: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sunny: OH GOD!

Jeffygeist: MM!

Meggy: Dang!

Tari: The f***?!?

Petra: S***!

Denny's head falls to ground as Mr. M retrieves his golden sword from Denny's corpse and shrinks its length to those of a needle. He puts the sword into his pocket and then gets a small bag from his pocket. Mr. M changes the size of the bag and placed Denny's corpse into it as he was about to give the bag to Sunny. He then pats Sunny's shoulder and gave her a kind smile.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: I have a way to revive him.

Sunny: You do?

Mr. M nods kindly and then stares angrily at Jeffygeist. He looks at Sunny before he was about to fight Jeffygeist.

Kung Fu Mario/Mr. M: (to Sunny) Leave and get out of here, I can fight him on my own.

Sunny: Alright. But I still won't forgive you for killing him.

Sunny and the others leave the room just before Mr. M is about to fight Jeffygeist.

Jeffygeist: YOU MURDERED MY ONLY FRIEND! HE WAS THE ONLY ONE THAT UNDERSTANDED ME AND NOW HE'S GONE! I'LL MAKE SURE YOU DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!

King Fu Mario/Mr. M: If you think you will defeat me by avenging your friend, then you shall have the same fate as him!

Jeffygeist: Bring it on, Kung Fu Loser!

End of Part 1 Nice!