Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-30571467-20190627001539/@comment-34595515-20190627005157

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: So now that I've seen Dr. RoBUTTnik appear and attempt to reclaim SAG only to fail, will he join Denny in order to reclaim them even if it means to KILL Manny? Also, since Ausar was present watching the whole entire scene where they (the villains) are now attempting to kill Crystal, what will happen to him next? And finally, about Entity 303 and Thane. Maybe you can put Thane mentioning his past! However, Entity 303 refuses to give his info out. Here's their former... well... whatever you'd like to call it.

Thane - Former sentinel guard at Saranthia, High Lord of House Ix and shield of the Great Pact. Eventually, later had his Q.I.P. turned into horrifying monster and being killed. However, Entity 303 revived him

Entity 303 - A former Beacontowner who is very tragic. He has his family murdered by Herobrine and was thrown off a cliff presumably killed. He is now a unruly robe figure who wants revenge on his enemy. However, down add this in the story. Just let him say that he refuses to give off his identity because he'd rather not talk about it. 1. I'm planning for him to join Denny after the heroes managed to regain the heart and break back Sunny! That point will also be when Denny is having his breakdown since Sunny is now a problem for him again.

2. I'm planning for Ausar to attack one of the villains who lay their hands on Crystal!

3. Sounds good! So, you want me to reveal their past, but not their identities? If so, can I do it in flashback? 1. Nice!

2. Ok! But DON'T have Ausar see Crystal in her Cosmonaut suit! I have planned that for "Infinity Hunt"! Also, Ausar is a bit shy. So upon encounter Crystal, make Ausar leave immediately and have him continue fighting villains who go near her! Also, have Crystal try to talk to Ausar who keeps refusing. Eventually when Crystal catches up with Ausar, she gets some but little info of him as he leaves once again.

3. Sure! For Thane, yes! I will actually share some dialogue with you so you can have it prepared for a chapter! As for Entity 303, he will not tell anyone, but at least a flashback can be seen. A horrifying one where Herobrine kills Entity 303's family. 1. Got it!

2.  Ok! I'm also thinking maybe to NOT show Entity 303 in the flashback, but instead show the whole thing from his POV (Point of view)!