Thread:MarioFan2009/@comment-34595515-20190417050935/@comment-34595515-20190417053100

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: YES! Can't wait to see it! 1. What do you like about the teaser?

2. Want me to show you the scene? 1. The way how SF's hand was drawn and the potion!

2. Sure!

Also, quick thing. Zulzo's Plan will lead a very VERY dark scene to Zulzo. Let's just say he's gonna be slightly "disfigured"... Obi Wan Kenobi: Oh dear.

Anyways, here's the scene!

Sunny: So, who are you?

Petra: Well, I'm Petra and that's my friend, Olivia!

Sunny: Cool! My name's Sunny Funny by the way.

Olivia: Nice! By the way, what happened to your eye and hand?

Sunny: Eye got taken out by RH 2.0 and my hand was taken out by Moony. I'll explain more once all of this is over!

Olivia: Ok! Well, I can actually help with that problem!

Sunny: Really?

Olivia pulls out a bottle filled with a pink liquid. Olivia then pours it on Sunny's severed hand and it regenerates. The potion is then poured into Sunny's eye socket and her old eye grows in place.

Sunny: Nice! What was that?

Olivia: That was a regeneration potion. Any lost body parts will be regained upon drinking it!

Sunny: Thanks!

Olivia: No problem!

What do you think of the scene? Nicely done! Also, since Zulzo's Plan is coming in September, Masked Menace and Jeffygeist will play as protagonists instead of antagonists! (Masked Menace will already redeem himself and I decided to give Jeffygeist a protagonist role before CuldeeFell13's Jeffygeist: Rise and Fall) should I show you a small clip? 1. Sure!

2. What did you like about the scene? 1. Sunny getting her eye and arm back!

2.

Jeffygeist and Masked Menace (Denny Funny as a theory) are seen in the newly approved Zulzo's department shop.

Jeffygeist: This place looks great! Ain't it Denny?

Masked Menace: Sure is! Ever since I have redeemed myself...

Jeffygeist: We... we can still play as villains right?

Masked Menace: Well, I can't destroy stuff... but I might help with vandalism and robbery if I can!

Suddenly, painful sobbing is heard.

Jeffygeist: Huh?

Masked Menace: It seems as if it coming from Zulzo's office!

Jeffygeist: Let's go see what happened!

Masked Menace: Ok.

They go into Zulzo's office and he is seen with his back turned.

Jeffygeist: Zulzo?

Masked Menace: Something wrong?

Zulzo: Ohhhh damnit... my God...

Jeffygeist: What's wrong?

Masked Menace: Yeah! Tell us what is going on-

Suddenly, he turns around and it quickly goes back to Jeffygeist and Masked Menace.

Jeffygeist is seen with a terrified face.

Jeffygeist: Oh... dear... NEPTUNE!!!!

Denny Funny takes his Masked Menace mask off and is seen with small pupils and a shocked face.

Denny Funny: WHAT ON GOD'S NAME HAPPENED?!

Coming soon... Oh.. crap...

Anyways, excited!

Also, what do you think of Jesse, Petra, Olivia, Axel and Lukas?