Thread:MarioFan2009/@comment-34482203-20190421234530/@comment-34482203-20190421235300

MarioFan2009 wrote: CuldeeFell13 wrote: (It starts off with Maguro waking up in the SML house)

Maguro: Ugh. Where am I?

(Maguro then hears a bunch of arguing)

Maguro: I wonder what they are arguing about?

(Maguro peeks into a room and sees Brooklyn T. Guy, Mario and Jeffy surrounding a table with birthday stuff on it)

Brooklyn Guy: Nice hat.

(Brooklyn Guy trashes the whole table then leaves)

Jeffy: Wha! Daddy did you see him!

Mario: Yeah I saw him. He acted like a total b***h!

Jeffy: He ruined my birthday!

Mario: Hey Jeffy! I have a plan!

Jeffy: What is it daddy?

Mario: Go to the back and grab that flamethrower we never use.

Jeffy: Got it daddy!

(Jeffy leaves to go get a flamethrower)

Maguro: Flamethrower?

(Maguro runs after them. She then runs by Brooklyn T. Guy's house. She then looks into a window and sees Brooklyn Guy entering the house. Sharon is seen in the kitchen)

Sharon: Hey honey! How was today!?

Brooklyn Guy: Shut up!

(Brooklyn Guy then gets into bed. He then smells something burning)

Brooklyn Guy: Uh Sharon!?

Sharon: Yes dear?

Brooklyn Guy: Did you burn the roast again?

Sharon: But i'm not cooking roast.

Maguro: He's right! What is that smell?

/(Maguro looks outside of Brooklyn Guy's house and sees that Mario is shooting flames at Brooklyn Guy's house with the flamethrower)

Maguro: HOLY S**T!

(Officer Goodman then comes up)

Goodman: Whats happening here Mkay?

Mario: Brooklyn Guy ruined my son's birthday.

Goodman: What?! Give me that flamethrower

(Goodman continues to use the flamethrower while Mario and Jeffy stand back and watch)

Maguro: Man, he's a really terrible cop!

(Maguro looks back into the house, Brooklyn Guy is coughing because of the smoke)

Brooklyn Guy: Why!? Why must this happen.

(Brooklyn Guy looks to his left and see's Sharon on the ground dead)

Brooklyn Guy: Yes! Take that you bi- *cough cough*. Well this is it.

(Brooklyn guy falls down to the ground dead)

Maguro: Well this was weird! I'm outa here!

(Maguro enters a portal and leaves) Noice! Fun fact! The scenes with Mario, Jeffy, Brooklyn Guy, Goodman, and Sharon were from my old Jeffy's Birthday Suprise! Alternate Ending! My first alternate ending ever! Here is the link to the original!

https://sml.fandom.com/wiki/Jeffy%27s_Birthday_Surprise!#comm-84550

Anyways, what else do you like about it?