Thread:Rh390110478/@comment-30571467-20190719050358/@comment-34595515-20190719053021

MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote: MarioFan2009 wrote: Rh390110478 wrote:

MarioFan2009 wrote: May I just add in some suggestions for the last Chapter that you could have forgotten by now? 1. I'm still working on it!

2. Sure! Ok! Here they are.

Since a few villains have been defeated, maybe Dark Tari can attempt to kill Crystal. Immediately, this alerts Ausar and he starts beating her up, and possibly joining the battle! However, don't let him interact Crystal in her Cosmonaut suit MASKED! I already planned something.

Robotic Cat. In the final battle, when Robotic Cat kills off a ton of Xens, he will lose control of his feelings and attempt to kill the heroes like how Maguro did as Dark Tuna. For his feeling-Lost personality, he can be called: "Twisted Feline"!

Zero Mech possibly joining in the battle!

Also, maybe I add a rather little but new suggestion? It is only a small return of a duo... 1. Ok! I can put that in!

2. Cool! Female Robotic Cat can turn him to normal!

3. He will!

4. Sure! 1. Ok!

2. Nice! Also, what do you think of the name Twisted Feline?

3. Alright!

4. So, basically when Olivia and Petra are doomed and are about to be killed by Xens, a blast of some ice power can kill the aliens, saving them. Olivia and Petra will be shocked to see a duo that debuted in Chapter 23... who do you think it is? Entity 403 and Thane?

Also, the name sounds cool! 1. Correction: Entity 303. Also, YES! You are correct! They can rejoin the final battle!

2. Thanks! Nice! Anyways, I have to go to bed. I’ll continue Chapter 35 tomorrow!